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I like the descriptive fights however they can become boring after a while. The world background is pretty fleshed out but there seems to be a lot that the Author still haven't shown the readers yet. The process of gaining power is pretty interesting and the explanations are good. It has so many time skips its annoying. There a like 10 time skips for multiple years and dozens of time skips that skip months.I dislike character design of the MC. His thirst for power is just utterly insane, I understand that being his over-arching goal however he just completely removes anything from his life that won't help him in gaining more power. Later on he just becomes a total sociopath. When hiding he kills anyone who enters his general area when he could easily avoid them. He regularly summons and sends hundreds of insane creatures to attack towns (btw they literally hate all living things and actually DESTROY matter/energy, their entire desire is to devour the world) just so he can have up to a 25% increase in his physical ability. A duke sets a bounty on him so he completely destroys the dukes town of over a thousand people. He also has no point for wanting power. He is willing to kill thousands of innocent people, civilians, men, women and children just so he can have pointless power. He doesn't want friendship or luxury or love or ideals. He just wants power cause he hates the feeling of being weak and not in control. His mental age is 38 but his mindset is that of an absolute child.
Firstly your a hard working author. Secondly the mc is rational and ambitious with no moral restrains. Thirdly Im hooked.
A fresh take on an overly explored VRMMO genre . Very little information about the world as of now , but I'm sure that it will be very interesting . ( Review at chapter 17 ) Positives : 1) Solid grammar 2) Interesting world premise 3) No dumb clichès Hopefully the author shifts gears and zooms into a super story ??
It is an interesting Novel, where the cliche overpowered villian mc plot has been retweaked and produced a new variety of entertainment.Congratzz to the writer and hope you increase the excellence of the bookin the coming future.
Amazing story and world building, established many things very quickly but not rushing things, amazing story and I recommend reading it.KEEP WRITING, MY BESTO FRIENDO!
Bad not recommended but if you want read it then. Read it I already read this novel in the past I mean few months ago I was one of the new reader I stumbled this story and read for about 80 chapter but I quite love them but the problem the story I mean there are so many useless writing just put writing count and it was rushed because the author think the story is already good and the author tried not putting a cliche stories but it was still so cliche and can't do anything because the author only want word count and Not the story if it was for me but I think it was best read few chapter then if you love them then. Read it because the the story is like cycle
I think this novel has the good points and bad points as well, but my interest vanishes when the author starts mixed his nationality racism due to the old political grudge in chapter 18.
Although not specifically mention 'Japan' but people with common sense can guess which country he means with 'Jaban'.
It's fine if the author only targeting domestic Chinese readers, but to put this story in international reader, that's a bad move.
❤️Jack's favourite Novels ❤️
01) Lord of the Mysteries
02) The Sage Who Transcended Samsara
03) The Devil's Cage
04) Way of the Devil
05) Black Tech Internet Café System
06) Enlightened Empire (Webnovel original)
07) The City of Terror
08) Low Dimensional Game
09) The Legendary Mechanic
10) Gamers of the Underworld
Due to real life commitments I'm only able to consistently read this many novels at the moment. I only read the rest on my old list if one if these do not update or go on hiatus.
*Sees the title*
Hmm, looks cool.
*Reads the description*
Definitely sounds interesting...
*Sees the author*
Aw ****! Well, maybe this time will be different?
*Sees the reviews*
No, nope, no way, never happening!
Sigh... I've learned my lesson. Just going to avoid this author like the plague.
worth the time and energy. its a thriller with great deal of info presented nicely. the story flows smoothly and the suspense catches ur interest. great work and dedication. more please