This novel is very good. amazing fighting. magic and technology combining very well and characters are also written very well. world background is amazing too. But the story has a little flaw and I'm not gonna spoil you. Read it yourself
It's a very interesting novel and has an outstanding quality, from the grammar, to the characters, to the world building, everything is perfect.
Because it's entertaining, I give it five stars.
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Only read 10 chapters.Story involved a highschooler that transmigated into a pokemon-esque world where almost everyone has pets. Story development just feel okay to me, MC owned a pet, used the cheat, goes to adventure, get new pet, uses cheat etc. Very big downside to me is the translation quality. It seems separate people independently translates and edits each chapter as no consistent use of terms was established.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
How Do I Begin? I have no idea.Anyway, this will be a harem novel with powers. The apocalypse stuff happened long ago but it has a lot of influence on the plot a little later on. I'll update this daily but as I'm more focused on my main novel Dawn- an age of darkness, things might be slower. And this is my first time writing in this genre so if anything strikes you funny, do let me know. Do give me all your power stones and hopefully I'll win.
The writing quality is well and the story flows good. Andrew is an interesting male lead and I am really curious about his past now. Definitely recommend it.
It looks like a good novel but the only thing I'm concerned about is if it id going to be one of those ones where he eventually turns into a human coz those are quite annoying.
I love your writing style and the narration of the povs. There are few weird grammars but all in all it was good! I also love the way you describe the surroundings of the mc. Very descriptive and broad.
I like it but it's confusing most times like the random pov switches on different chapters with no warning and how it switches to diff events with no prior explanation gets kinda annoying
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I truly hope that you, Author, finish this story or else...
Mttl?
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