Clearly the Author has some bias towards other harem members.. *Nuwa* cough.. while other members only get mentioned by name and not having any lines. Xiao Wen was my favorite from the start and now she barely gets mentioned and just fades in the backgroud
Also author kinda bummed out the plot of the Liena's fate organization of the earth realm. They are trying to open the fate kingdom as their goal when it just suddenly opened when MC kidnap a girl and Fate king was like "kill him for me". meh
I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.
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Bro no system, no cliche, no bs young masters just a very good well written novel. Very pleasing man i swear i read all 60 chapters in one go. but the ending killed me, cuz i fuxking hate cliffs. Defo a top novel worth voting for.
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The novel 'You're talent is good, now it's mine' was forgotten and 'My special ability is perfect replication' was chosen. They are same traits too. Haaaaaays, what a waste.
Gostei muito da história muito boa maravilhosa continue
I have to say, as a massive fan of the Zelda video games I absolutely loved this! Gave me serious Breath of the Wild vibes. Loved the idea of goblins and creatures suddenly appearing from all over the world, and temples which have to be cleared to level up and progress - straight out of an RPG game. The fight scenes as the protagonist battles his way through small hordes of goblins are all great, as diverse as can be in various sword tactics and very well-written. I liked how the protagonist has developed from a meek child and is transforming himself into the hero of the piece as he discovers he has a natural ability to defeat the goblins and is growing in strength the more enemies he defeats. Really great stuff so far. This story has a really pacy opening and has limitless potential to go very far. Highly recommend giving this a go.
Master's writing skill is top-notch... This is a good book with an interesting plot. I love the mc's luck.. 5 stars because it deserves it. Keep going master, disciple had an enlightenment after reading your book
It's really fun to read!
The story is currently in it's very early stages but the world building and character development have been really good so far. I loved Zhou because of how realistic he is (also cause he's cynical and I love that in a person). And I've dubbed Toshiro as Toshi boy simply because he's too naive and innocent in my opinion.
The POV change was executed brilliantly. So smooth, so neat and also so easy to pick up on!
The grammar is very good. The chapters are short and don't have any unnecessary details. This kept me interested in reading till the end.
I loved the content that I have read till now and have added this to my library!
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