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Pro's
You can see the writing quality improving as the story continues
MC can cultivate outside of the system
Con's
I noticed many inconsistencies in the story
The story is in desperate need of more world development
The system is an almost a non-existent part of the story
Certain story points that are added for plot are illogical
Qing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master
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The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.
After Reading Top Tier Providence, I found this story quite trashy. I mean ya'know what I mean, and I don't know what was the first created cause I'm not qidian peeps.
So, I did try to give this story a try and it shows some promise. My main issue is how passive the MC is, this on top of the fact it has no tags makes me worry.
To many good books have been ruined by massive MCs, I get wanting to build up the MC and show them grow into their role. However, with the personality of most of the females around him it makes me hesitant to continue reading.
It is an interesting idea behind it and once it has tags or some sort of guarantee that The MC will change. I would be willing to come back and give it a second shot.
Don't waste your time.
This novel is Webnovel edition of 'I transmigrated into another world and proceeded to live my life as a worthless maggot until the end of my days.'
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Thanks for the great story thus far sir. Hoping for more and faster updates.
The progression is great by the way.
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The author writes like a child, he tells and doesn't show, it's literally "The MC did this, the MC did that, cue timeskip" every character is poorly written and it's like reading robots interacting.
When it comes to storylines about survival whether in movies or novels. I will definitely be among the top readers but what makes a story a different one is the author. With such a great author, I'm sure this will make one keep begging for more. Keeping going author
Lol bonk is indeed justice, great start, there are only a few chaps so not much to say other than let's join the master on his bonk journey.
Hello everyone So far the story is really captivating And interesting For someone That really like stories with a system and missions that makes the character grow this story is already getting Better and as tge chapters keep on coming I’m Sure that the story will have all kinds of plot twists and possibly a few near death experiences.
The first chapter is good, and the book has an interesting plot that caught my eye almost immediately. I love how the writer portrays the characters.
Kudos to the author!