In every chapter I was grinning crazily, it is sweet and so good. Am still in the early chapters and I gotta say, it is going to be a great story between Alayah and Aaron. Love it!
Hello Author-san! First of all I wanna thank you for using my idea and adding in to your story. It's a great honor to see the character I've thought alive in your story. So I have another idea for a new character for your story. I hope you can get some idea from this for the new character development.
Character: no name yet
Story: a dropout student who now became a shut-in and spend his whole day playing games, watching movies, etc. Found by Souchi and the gang when looking for a new hideout still playing in his room.
Traits: have no idea about what happened to the outside world. Quite the handsome guy if not for his chunibiyo side. Clumsy sometimes but can make people admire him because of his intense focus when he's doing something (he got it from playing games). Likes challenges. View his life as some sort of a game. Have a vast knowledge about zombies (he got it from playing, reading and watching movies with zombie genres). Tend to overreact sometimes.
Role: provide some humor to the story by applying his game knowledge to real life but not working just like he expects.
I think he would be a great sniper in the group or maybe he can help chi in her research
Do yourself a favor. Don't even start reading. The characters in this book are such trash that your head will hurt with each piece of stupidity they do that flys in the face of even the most basic common sense. It's clear that the author had some outline for the way things should happen and then forced his characters to follow it without even trying to make the circumstances fit with the decisions the characters make. It's just ugly. Every other paragraph something happens that just makes you rub your head and facepalm at the insanity. Turn back before you suffer through reading this.
You ever read those dime a dozen urban chinese manhua? Ever think, wow, this art's quality sure is low, the harem's boring as ****, and the main protagonist might just be a high functioning autist?
Yes. It's literally that manhua, but as a novel. Webnovel, why? Why are you translating such pieces of **** when there's legitimately good novels out there?
Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
Kiba is perhaps the greatest harem mc out there! yes i even put him above konrad!his sassiness, his flirty ways, him going around cucking dudes , his shamelessness! and boy is he smooth!you are tired of all those r18 and harem stories where the mc don't do any effort to get the women in bed? you tired of reading about them using their stupid system and aphrodisiac scent to turn women into lusty sluts?well look no further this is the book you are looking for!kiba is smooth! knows how to flirt! and he does not need no system or incubus powers to get a woman under him and that alone makes this story a MUST READ!
a good story with an MC who only cares about him and his quest to have eternal life !...............................mmmmmmmm....................................
more please it's really good, like where it's going and please dont drop as most system novels in this theme dont last long... thank you!!!!
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Hey Webnovelist!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected] We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!