It seems cliche and it think it's getting worse because it seems like everything revolves around Mc even though he is insignificant in terms of cultivation. Let me give u an example his adoptive brothers sister who may be 30 gets angry from his sisters son for ignoring him i mean what kind of childish stuff is this he is 30 for God's sake even I would not be offended by such a small thing and I'm 15 this novel needs to stop such childish interactions I have seen alot of them already on other novels but I the concept is fresh as someone said I will give it a try if it improves I will stay around giving power stones .
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so the book has a great premise and starts out slow but is good enough to read on. It truly is a bit complicated, but that doesn't interfere the plot. I applaud the authors' ability to maintain the plot lines.
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why there's no one reviewing this novel? it's actually good even though the paragraph was too long, I need more
1. This is not harem course don hate harem I don't why 2. this novel does not have lots of mistakes in grammar 3. this novel has a promising future if don doesn't drop this Lastly, if I'm correct this novel would be publish in mega novel this page was just temporary
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waiting for new chaps and the story was very good we will like you to continue ❤️❤️❤️❤️?????❤️???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
i hate this story, seems like a low quality "young master template n 4