Noise Novel, Decent Grammar, Okay world building and concrete story, although why are there 2???
Is webnovel glitching or something
The story is well designed as far as I have read, the grammar and structuring need some serious work, and the character creation is a nice change from a mc that is always stupidly righteous.
Book is good about cultivation. I like martial arts so putting it to library.
I love this book, i love the story, character etc. I hope it gets picked. I extremely recommend it. I Love this book i love this book i love this book
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
I like it! The synopsis is interesting and it really made me want to read it. The first chapter shows what is happening or what the story entails. I'm still annoyed at the guy who fudging killed him.
Great story though! I can't see any grammatical errors. It's smooth to read and it's fun to read too!
Great job author!
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The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc.
If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps).
Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.
Very nice story, It is very interesting how the plot might turn out, suspenseful enough to keep you wanting the next chapter. I am not a big fan of romance , so I think it is fine without much like it is in this novel. lots of fights are good. it is nice to see that the mc has a personality and is not just strong, although his personality does bite him back some bits.
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I can't help but to find humor in this.
It's a great cultivation that's actually entertaining.
Each chapter feels like an onslaught of madness.
keep it up.
Honestly was so badly cliched and written I couldnt make it past chapter 3. All these reviews seem suprr fake and I have no idea how thos novel has 4 stars.