Traveler: The Last of His Kind
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I want to try creating one, please don't expect^⁠_⁠^

I really want to create a book, maybe someday I will be able to be good enough to publish one. Though, for now this is fine.

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Vanitas or Mordret who is he, really?

It doesn't matter as long as those light are there. It was beautiful those eyes...

There are times when his eyes once shine as bright as stars and as clear as light.

But that was long ago.

Was the things he ever done something that he could be fond of? Was wanting for the sake of others a beautiful thing that everyone should do?

If those questions were asked on him when he was who he was before, maybe the chance of sacrificing his self for others isn't as far-fetched as he thought.

But now, All he cared about is about his life, how he will escape in the inescapable line that thread on him and the Fateless fate he have.

All he care is how he will survive a day inside the asylum that others see as an opportunity.

All he knows and all he long is for someone to hold him, but now he care none at all.

Realizing the graviting he was put of. He knows better than anyone that rest is something that others see as causality of leisure. For him it was a time ticking fabric that is slowly but noticeably being ripe apart.

Vanitas or Mordret who is he really?

Is he even a human?

Or a monster that isn't supposed to be here.

There's no use in crying in things that will never change. The thing he have is to move forward, even if he knows that everything isn't about moving on or staying off.

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Okay honest review here the whole idea was amazing but story it' self isn't the reason.1: Everything is rushed, the story is developing to fast.2: MC doesn't interact with other characters much3: MC fucking didn't change a thing in MCU until Avengers first move. I haven't read after that.Okay something would like to tell.1: Make the paragraph of only about 5-7 lines and that all a try to write dialogue in different lines.If you author has done writing this story once try writing it again and then give it to your all I will support you.Aside from all that can only say A for effect but just write this story again for only two times as I said earlier and this story will be top MCU fanfic
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First of, I miss WW but I am happy about it being here. That sayd let's get to review!Translation Quality:5/5- Its perfect what do you expect?Update Stability:5/5- Since the start there where no unforseen hiatus or breaks. 5/5 really stableStory Development: 1/5- The Start is really good but more often that not the story get's streched without the need with unimportand chapters as well as boring informations.Char Development:4/5-Solid, good, niceWorld background:5/5Nothing to complain overall: 4.00Give this story a chance it is worth it. Don't worry even though it has a lot of boring and usless chapters it is absolutly worth it!
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cool story... it;s a long time since i relaxed into a story like this. It's not about the characters or worldbuilding. It's just about the story and a great story at that. The author is an amazing story teller, i got so immersed on those long chapters i lost track of time.
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This is an very nove story but development of the Mc is left to be desired but I still like it it very in character of the Mc as he is shown to be kind
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