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it's quite funny so i guess it's okay, only problems i have is with the translation it's iffy at parts but oh well
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the novel should be good or atleast interesting but the problem is the translation, and surprisingly this bad translation is actually from henyee translation who was good translator in the past not sure what happened but their translation quality dropped
I'm not a fan of martial art/spirits, but I am a fan now! I really like how you did with the story. Everything feels new to me, but you had a knack for describing things in the novel! Keep up the good work!
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I'm sad to see the author abandon their other world, even if it was brand new but I'm happy to see this new story as well. The summary is interesting enough
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I am the Great Flame Alchemist Roy Mustang. The start of this story and the system feels weirdly similar to the Reincarnation in Another world as a slime. I love that anime btw so my review can be a bit biased.
I love the fact that someone else picked up a system of this kind. It's one of the best out there and I don't understand why it's so underrated or why there aren't more stories relating to it out there. Anyway, the start is pretty good and I am ready to give it a chance.
I haven't managed to read a lot of the chapters, but based on what I've read so far, the story is quite intriguing. The progression is not too rushed, but it's not too slow either. Every chapter was written with care. Keep up the good work, author.
The plot very interesting but the translate is suck aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
To be honest this is quite a weird book with an equally as weird MC. I am currently on chapter 322 and even though I find the book weird and sometimes confusing it is quite intriguing and a good read, the chapter are long so if You choose to spend your precious coind i would say what you get is more than worth the price.
The Mc is twisted, cold and calculating I don’t know the right words to describe him if I had to I would describe him as a high functioning sociopath with psychopathic tendencies.
The story telling and world building is exemplary almost outstanding. Spelling and grammar is top notch only a few mistakes or errors here and there, an example of this is how the author consistently spells “emperor” as “emporer”.
All in all I’d say the book places somewhere between a 4.5/5 and a 5/5.
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