Each chapter is as long as twice or thrice of normal fantasy novels. Though I read 90 chapters only, it took me 2 days to do so and I think that much must be worth 200+ ch. Also the story and plot is awesome. I love OP and here it is OP. Moreover it's balanced as the mc also gets to suffer a lot but this is what makes it intriguing. The mc has potential to surpass the heaven itself as the heaven were fearful to even seal his talent. (That in itself shows the enormous potentials it has). The novel also has many twists and turns like how he got other bloodlines from System, how he got new physique in lucks and opportunities and there were events out of expectation, like the betrayal of his adoptive grandfather(to which there is reasonable story as well). Most importantly, The mc knows when to take heed of system and so it's not dependent on system. The MC's hardwork is more provident as you read the chapters and understands that Mc has the determination and understanding that only he himself can become stronger. I don't think that giving arts and techniques to others is bad since every mc has his friends, brothers or subordinates that they bring to the top in a cultivation level, moreover once you read you will realise the it's not that much OP techniques given to other, compared to what our Mc itself have. With the best world building you could ever have, I already have the general view of the Martial world, also called outer realm, only by reading the 90 chapters. The universe is the world they live in and there are outer realms where mc is born, also dragon realm, heavenly realm, and wonderful plot along with that hidden in a story where the heavenly realm is the plotter villian of his parents and him.There is also that Nine heavens and ten Earth mentioned by a random war spirit which could possible be past life mystery.Updating stability is awesome, It only took me two days to finish the novels but author released 4 chapters in that time, leading from the growth of ch90 to 94..Also the author is talkative and answer your queries, he is tolerating the cricitism and answering to that! He is the best author you could get..Moreover as you slowly read, you will realise the awesomeness of growth type novels as the MC's personality slowly changes..As for writting quality? You could hardly get spelling or grammatical mistakes, equal to impossible.Hmm I'll only say this, for me this novel belongs to the best of the novels in my heart.You might feel dissapointed with the turns of events and sometimes unreasonable but what you don't know is that, there is no unreasonable acts in the novel! and if you continue reading, everything will be slowly revealed, just like a wonderful art of revealing.
Kudos to the author! I have fun reading and so far so good! I only found few grammatical errors but didn't mind it. Still the author made his narration fun so it will be enjoyable. The chapter was still few but I know that it has potential in the future. And again, thank you for making a wonderful novel for me to read!
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Thank you for doing what you do. I really like the story and now I can read it without getting a brain aneurysm :)And 140 characters, everyone knows the drill......
This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.
Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans.
Great Novel. Its been a long time since a novel with Mech is being released. The Mc is a little dumb because of his simple life and lack of consistent education. The side characters so far are also likeable. MC thinks before he acts, Doesn’t just goes and kills because someone provoked him. The world is quite big with two factions currently against each other. The cheat is an AI, Its quite mischievous and mysterious, not much is explained about it yet. All In all its a great novel. If you like this you can also check out Legend Of the Supreme soldier and Vice versa.
What a great story, with a stunning world. each character has solid, memorable, and likeable development. Good luck with that, ik it’s gonna be great ^__^ 10/10
Nice and easy going translations keep going. I hope this work will pass trial.I like the boss chatroom.After the heroes with the huge debt and the adorable sister... why every times it"s the same plot
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The story seems good and the only thing that needs fixing is the grammar as some sentences are weird and ruin the immersion. The MC also seems questionable at times, but I’m hoping he’ll get better as the author continues the story. I’m also biased though as the story reminds me of “Everybody Else Is A Returnee”. Can’t wait for more!