I love Hina so much!!!! This novel is such a good read and I'm pretty excited about it! Can't wait to meet other characters and I'm waiting for next chapter
If you want a story that makes sense leave. one moment it says naruto have kage level chakra then the Next it says he has jonin level. also even though naruto has sage body he still needs the summons locations to become a sage. Mc also Unlocks his sharingan by just pushing chakra In his eyes( not activate he unlocks it) and its never explained how. this is just a bit i got from the first 5 chapters so read this if you arnt going to pay attention to it.
This story is one of the more interesting ones released for this trial batch. To be honest, I’m a sucker for beast taming stories and this is one of the more interesting ones. It’s got a unique premise that kept me interested after getting past the slow pacing in the beginning and the world building is pretty good. You can definitely tell that the author put some serious thought into the world. I also like how the MC’s power isn’t OP. It comes with some very reasonable limitations.That being said, there are some flaws with this story:1. The classic blasé attitude the MC has when they realize they’ve transmigrated. This is a huge pet peeve of mine as I don’t think it’s a realistic reaction no matter how many transmigration stories they read in their past life. ?2. Random emojis in the story. I’ve seen this in a few stories and I think it’s just lazy.3. Lack of consistency—the author seems to have trouble keeping track of what level certain skills should be and keeps flip flopping between proficient and expert. Not being able to keep track of details like this seems to be a common issue with stories. This really drove me crazy when I was reading. It should not be that hard to keep it consistent.4. Some occasional bad grammar, but it doesn’t happen often, thankfully.But despite the flaws, I enjoyed reading it and I would recommend it if you like beast taming stories.
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Hasnt this novel already been on pilot reads? Its just a different name. Anyways, Cool concept but seems boring. might just be cuz im bored rn
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I won't be able to write much because of the small number of chapters, but I will be waiting for the continuation. So far it's running fine and doesn't bother me while reading. Thank you for the author's hard work.
the pilot is good and it's promising story. will look forward to more of the story. The opening was different considering some. i think the story will have good oncoming chapters
Legendary Armament Canon is a story about Zhou Shu, a transmigrator. Upon transmigrating, the main character finds out he is a young blacksmith apprentice (slave) who died of overworking. He uses his system to get out of his precarious predicament and to get stronger in a world where the strong rule the weak.
I enjoy the idea of this novel quite a bit. I found this novel when looking for blacksmithing novels in general, and I found the idea of creating weapons and getting stronger when someone uses said weapon to kill interesting. However, I can't help but feel like the story shifted into nonsense at some point.
The translation quality okay, there's nothing good or bad about it. It's better than most, and there's no obvious mistakes. (4/5 stars)
The story development ties in closely to the main character's horrid personality, but I'll get to that later. The main character, Zhou Shu, works as a blacksmith apprentice, which is basically a slave. They don't get paid enough to live, and three generation's of his family have died due to overworking. The main character uses his system to forge new weapons. This backfires on him, and he is now forced to teach other people how to make a complicated weapon. After barely completing this, he is promoted to a slightly-more-valuable slave. He then invents even more weapons, and the government, upon realizing he is a genius who will probably become a full-on blacksmith, promotes him to a administrative position? They then force him to hire a bunch of people to complete a nigh-impossible order of weapons. He has arguably downgraded from the start of the novel.
The only action in this novel is essentially the main character meddling in other people's battles, and getting attacked randomly by assassins. Main character is carried by the fact he gets overpowered abilities.
Aside from that, the plot is the generic xianxia hidden identity overpowered main character, with a healthy dose of random misunderstandings. Very similar to "Zero to Hero in the Martial Arts Library" in this sense. (2/5 stars)
Character design is downright horrid. All the characters in this novel are one dimensional, and unlike most humans, do not have a logical thought process. Not to mention, the main character can only be described as a pushover. He is constantly hounded to do nigh-impossible task over and over again, and this never really changes. He barely has any complaints, and he is hardly using his system to his advantage. Majority of characters are unlikeable, this novel makes every character exceedingly stupid so whenever the main character shows average intellect he is shown as a genius. (1/5 stars)
World background is average. The novel is hardly descriptive, and I don't think they even said the names of other countries. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)
Overall, an interesting idea but very poor execution. Author didn't put ANY effort into the characters, and the plot was sub-par as well. This is a typical cookie-cutter overpowered xianxia main character novel.
People are giving low stars without even reading really not doing justice to the authors and translators work
I hear they hold hands in this book. So lewd. I could never read something like that. but, if you are not against that... read on. I hear there are more lewd things to come.
5 stars from me
Truth be told i just randomly decided to read because i was bored and looking through some comments on an event and i saw this, and so i decided to read it. I wasn't really expecting much from the start and expecting it to be like most other vr games iwas actually quite shocked. Also another reason for me thinking the novel is good is because i took the time to search it click it and add to to library and thats not impressive idk what is.