needs updates now please I'm begging
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Really good story. It's progressing nicely. A decent level of immersion. It's also easy to get a feel of the emotions of the MC especially during 18+ scenes.
Writing Quality : Top quality. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story.
Updates : As far as I'm concerned, the author is doing a great job here. As an author myself, I know the difficulties that comes with regular updates. Yet, the author is maintaining a stable updates.
Story Development : The story follows the tale of Jim, a boy who was caused his entire life but finally awakens himself and be on his path to become the fairy king. Readers will find this book impossible to drop once they start reading. A well written story that progresses in a great way. No deviation from the main plot.
Character Design : The characters are well made. From the little I've seen of them, I just have to commend the author. They are well thought out, especially the MC, Jim.
World Background : What more can I say about the fantasy world that is not known already. The way the author designed the magical settings, magical races and whole fantasy world in general, is simply amazing.
Overall : A very good novel by a very good author. Highly recommended.
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it just a cliche novel like others. it is a waste of 5 years for separation. i just reading in a few chapter only and start to give up. ???????
it so good try it im also not a bot but i wanna be a fan so fyxhccffrrfrfrfrffrrrrdrrdrffrffrdrfddrdrxrrxdrdxrdrcrrdcdxdrcrrddrdrdrfrffrdrfrfrfrrfrf4f5ff5fttgg
This is a good novel. Although it has some grammar error and typo, it is still understandable. This kind of concept is very few and I really like it.
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the novel is very good continue with 1 chapter a day❤❤❤❤?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
good bookkeep it up ???,...,.,....................,.............,..................................................... ................