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It's a fan fiction right so why is it in this section and finally as its a ff why the heck chapters are locked. Finally is it a ff or not
Really like this MC personality tho he's too cold to his friends sometimes but still good
Story is pretty good and power system is interesting also especially the soul weapons power
I just need one answer to start reading does it have NTR?. If yes, I will not read it it's disgusting....................................................................
Sleep deprived review time:
Starting it off, the writing quality is exact-a-mundo, descriptions are well handled, action is awesome, and dialogue flows nicely.
From what I've seen, the story is fantastic, albeit having another 'overpowered MC' in it, this is just bias, but there have been too much overpowered MC's lately...
Characters are well thought out, their personalities are unique in their own special way, Ame especially. (if you can tell, I'm an Ame Supremacist)
The author said he would be releasing a chapter every 2-3 days, which I don't mind at all, since the chapters are worth the wait.
And finally, world background, I can only say two words, very. cool.
There is a really funny book that has a very shady system. The system is rather funny with its antics. All in all it's a rather fun book to read
Alright... So the story is getting more interesting but the suspense is quite stifling. Most importantly, Mister Kalu, you do not seem quite regular as promised posting only a chapter per day. This is quite unfair for us readers.
Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand.
The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man.
The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays.
Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.
Title: 百年修仙,我快死了金手指才来
Author: 极西行者
Status: 308 Chapters and Ongoing
I read the first 25 chapters months back on Qidian and liked it but put it aside since I was mainly looking for Sci-fi. My note was that it was decent, similar to Farue's review, so I might get back it someday when in the mood to read more fantasy novels. Rated 4 stars since I've only vague memories that it was interesting.
the ntr just ruined it. I mean the was trash but u could pass ur time with it but ntr just ruined everything.
In the past I had rated this novel quite highly, but as of chapter 200 I’m beginning to get fed up with how the book is written.
The system quickpy becomes irrelevant and there is no progression on that end nor is it even mentioned hardly at all. His medical skills? Also essentially become obsolete except for every 50 chapters he will maybe do a dissection.
The MC has turned into some mystical detective who continuously gets led around by his nose by all these different organizations who make him constantly have illusions.
Literally. Half the book from chapters 50-200 is just the guy having illusions and suffering. His abilites help him hardly at all and he remains a weak character all throughout. Even when the MC strengthens himself, its all for naught.
The MC is a powerless character who just follows a line others have set out for him and everything he does is all calculated by others.
Its the same shitty feeling as 008 in Lord of the Mysteries where everything the MC does is just what the quill writes. I’m not even able to articule in words the feeling other than just how disappointing and unenjoyable it is.
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The MC can't decide. Does he want to be indifferent and mind his own business, or does he do want to involve himself in situations were he might die. The story feels so damn forced. The Mc doesn't seem to consider the consequences of his actions and lies. The conflicts are especially forced in this one since the MC seems to try his very best to avoid trouble. Don't worry though, the author can use something as convient as 'karma' to explain away all these plot holes.
But this is a gag novel so I really don't know what I expected.
