Finally a science novel I'm sick of cultivation and magic novels most of them use something that belongs to the world to gain power and immortality but what happens when the qi or mana of the world runs out in what way do they keep their power. I hope he won't just depend on the system scientific blueprints and develop his on technology most MCs use the system for everything which is dumb makes me feel that the MC possess no IQ whatsoever
This novel has a serious case of word-count-itis. The author wastes so incredibly much time on useless nonsense just to make the story longer. It felt like it would be a faster story at first, with the various time skips, but nearly every "event" within the story is just a waste of space. Not to mention that the in-world logic is just nonsensical, and the author pretty much just does whatever he wants with no regard for making the plot seem natural or realistic. Very surprised so many people 5 starred this and is recommending it as one of the best current xianxia novels. To me, it's very low quality writing.
This is my first review ever and I'm not writing it because this novel is special....no I'm writing it 'cause im bored..anyway, I'll start off with the mc, he is a complete retard that's like most of the other chinese novels' mc-s "if you stare at me i'll slaughter your entire family" nothing new, the mc fails to make you think that he's 9 years old not to mention he is 18+.
As for the world building, the world building is.......(wait, is there even a worldbuilding?)
In addition, And the translation is very bad
So in summery this novel isn't worth reading unless you're new to reading lightnovels and don't mind all the clichés and non-existent logic and the bad translation
The only thing that's unique about this novel and attracted us to it is the idea ,but in fact the idea is stolen from {trafford trading club} which is better than this by a thousand times.
I think it's pretty good, but mc doesn't really have any edge in terms of maturity, you know something like an expert's memory or experiences. in this novel mc is just showing his talent left and right.
I have read far more stories where a scheming expert could destroy stronger opponent. In this cultivation world full of uncertainties, i think that those who have knowledge is far more ahead of everyone, so this mc is just not my type.
Author also doesn't reveal any sign of the girl's v**ginity being taken after int*rcourse, it is just said that his girl has mature body even on such a young age, who knows if she's a sl*t.
Typical another author getting me addicted to their book. I definitely recommend this and you just have to read it to understand why. More chapters please!
Really good book. This is an Overgeared style story but with more NPC stuff than PVP. Very good read. Been a while since something this good came out.
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A bit slow but well written with steady growth pace. This is a tower defense novel, and our MC is the city lord. If you enjoy strategy than this is for you.
People reviews make no sense and it makes me doubt if they even read this novel. This is very similar to Tensei Slime Isekai. Just a flame instead of a Slime. If you like fast-paced novels read this.
But people are ridiculous expecting a lot from only 40 chapters! You shouldn't judge when it's still the first arc! Unless It's a very trashy novel then I get it. But this one isn't that bad. MC is reincarnated in a very primitive world and he's decisive to kill to try to maintain some balance.
the story goes too slow.... not for me so i drooped it .. but the story got a good flow and indeed its a hidden gem.. just not suited for me.. or any other who don,t like slow development pace story ...
Mesmo em poucos capítulos a narrativa mostrou potencial, alguns aspectos ainda podem ser melhorados (Como a repetição de algumas palavras, e afins). Mas concluindo, achei legal!
Boa Sorte daqui para a frente XD!!
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