yes Mc played sevaral vr rpg and thinks about all the possibilities and chances to improve his fighting ability but and starts good upto 27 chaptets and get fairy guide and stops thinking even simplest things and it turns worse he got boost to fight an enemy but forget he had good skill that increases his attack powet and panics when boost was about end and was repairminded by fairy it was very boring to read to begin with but it gets even worse
Captain Usopp's was killed on the way to Laugh Tale and see his sweetest dream in the underworld, lol.
Pitiful parody of Path to Power.
So boooooooring.
Please dont drop this novel please please please dont be like those authors that start a great novel but Then stop the novel. please dont be like them
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I don't do Pokemon stories. also I have read until ch10 honestly this is just an average light novel.
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Please pick this novel! I recomend, this school is the dream of every student. The translation is really good, keep up the amazing work.
First 'real' review here.
First of all.
Writing Quality: There are a few mistakes here and there, but overall it is readable with little to no difficulty. The mistakes are not that common either, but even then one could read the novel without issue. So 4 * is a good rating.
Stability of Updates: So far I have seen 1-2 chapters per day, which is consistent. Nothing bad about that.
Story Development: Typical cultivation novel, but even then the power realms ain't the same bs as 'body tempering' or some bs. The realms are huge and the apex realm is called 'Grand Paragon' not some bs. The apex realm in novel can literally make the heavenly laws shake and welcome 'its ruler.' So I have no issue with this either.
Character Design: MC ain't bland, he has a life story and is nothing about that 'control my own fate' bs. He knows he is weak and isn't actively trying to find a way to cultivate because he knows he can't. Or can he? The wife is the most adorable thing I have read, she is cold to others but very overprotective over her husband. Their relationship develops quite well with a lot of funny interactions. The other side characters are also pretty interesting. They have their own role to play, and although there is some mystery to some characters it is slowly revealed.
World Background: FANTASTIC!! Different Universes or 'realms' are part of the novel. Each universe has its own things and of course they are at odds with each other. The Empire and world is greatly worked on. How the apex cultivators control the universes and protect them is also great.
I really have no issue with the novel besides the short chapters and occasional grammar mistake. Keep it up!
I just binge read the first four chapters without realising. First, the author. I've read/an reading all of his books and one thing I know is that the newer his book the better his writing, story building and character development are. That rule doesn't change here. Characters already have their distinctive personalities. The mc is a cold blooded, definitely not the type to spoil his woman to death. In other words, he's not a simp.
This concept of Qi is amazing. The world building was done perfectly well and at a good pace. This was my first time reading such a genre and I immediately fell in love with the story.
I will keep on reading it in the future too.
Caught up to this book. Very good read. Can't wait for more.
Writing Quality: Pretty good. Some grammar mistakes, missing words, repeated words. But still readable.
Updates: Finally caught up with the latest chapter. Hasn't updates in a month. Don't know the schedule.
Story Development: Standard reincarnation gaming tropes. MC gets reincarnated from future in game he played. MC knows what is coming in the future and tries to prepare. Tries to get a leg up for the future. Can't wait until major event happens.
Character Design: MC is loner. Was a depressed person before reincarnation. Has friends that wants to help him, he wants to go alone. Want to see more interactions with his friends and family.
World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Far into the future where things are automated, but still have people working. Games seems very realistic with advanced AI. Intuitive quest approval/denial, no yes/no prompt.
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Why are they translating this when someone is translating this? It’s called nomenclature of the night on novelupdates. Wonder novels has already translated upto chapter 78.