Here this is for moti.And tbh i quite like this novel........interesting novel by far........i really want to see moreI found this novel by chanceAt first didn't except muchBut quite good for a few chaptersCan't say much now since there's not much chapter to begin with But well dear author i hope you can write more! I will be waiting for more and GOOD LUCK to you!
A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixedThough you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that).And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up.Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author ?
Oooo! The synopsis of this book is vague and mysterious which is why it piqued my interest in it! A realistic fiction about showbiz? Definitely interesting to read! I like Jackson's narration in the first chapter. The author definitely knows how to keep the story mysterious to keep the readers hooked hahaha! I like your writing style! Please keep updating and keep up the good work author! Do complete this book, it's unique and interesting!! ??❤️❤️????
I loved this book, ive read it ten times on wattpadd and its still good as the first time i read it. keep up the good work for spreading this story. it deserves to be known to the webnovel world.