I haven't encountered this type of genre before, my first time seeing a monster with system. It's looking like a Simulation kind of novel and it's nice and cool.
How come u stopped writing?? Its a good book so I dont want to see if stop!!
I cannot follow the story at all becuase the grammar is so terrible, I read out to chapter 10 see if improved at all I did not. The only way to make this story readable is to fix the grammar in it
Loved the novel. It has a really fast update. Please update more. I want to see the mc clash with the Demon God as soon as possible.......................
Hope he is not a battle maniac.. I'm tired reading novel that always fight then run and fight again.. Like the novel of dragon-marked war god.. Even at chapter 1000 the girl is still virgin.. Sad..
The writing style here is really creative and unique, while the story has a nice tempo to it-- all in the present tense. So it feels like you're right in the moment with the characters. It's really refreshing. I think the story and character development needs some work, but it's really pulling together with the more chapters that come out. Good world building too! Also, the author seems to be putting out a lot of chapters in a short span of time, so looking forward to making this one of my usuals!
Gary stu MC. Gets everything handed to him on a silver platter. Growth is too fast. Author constantly contradicts himself and the MC consistently just makes the most nonsensical decisions. Author frequently has to nerf the character .
I am rather impressed. Starting from chapter one the story has been gripping. I have been reading web novels for a while and most of the time you get tired after reading a few chapters. This was not the case here. If the author keeps up such writing quality, this can be a big hit. Plus content is quite detailed which is always a plus. Good luck!
Like it so far! Good writing (English isn't my main langage thought, so I might not be good enough to see all the possible mistakes ^^), good update flow. For the story itself, the world is consistent and it is not that often that I saw authors using the three main dantian and not just one. Mixing magic and martial arts by that mean is not use often too. It seems like the author as put some thoughts in it to explain the process and not just saying "magic exists because it does...". Even thought the MC seems locked on one mindset, I like the fact that he is ruthless and don't care about moral bullsh*t or doesn't force logic to achieve his goals. He is quit straightforward, realistic and honest with himself. I wouldn't say he is a vilain, it's more like he does what's need to be done to survive while getting stronger. There is no Harem and smut cr*p so far, that's a good point too! I don't think the novel and the MC need romance either. Even if some characters are obviously here just to allow the MC to get some benefits he needs for the sake of making progresses in the story (the hunters or the unorthodox cultivators), it doesn't affect the reading that much IMO.
there is too much fake review, let me give you the real review
it's a really boring novel, I tried to read it till 140 chapters, I even started to skip but it's too trash to read. by the way I read mtl of martial God space to 1800 chapter and that crappy google translation entertained me more than this novel.
the MC is too fake, his speed talent and assasin path which where unique were lost as chapters progressed.
he was gone for creating spaceship and speed racing, robot making in like first 150 chapters
I voted for this novel because of authors other novel, if you want to read a space adventure go and read galactic dark net it's a good one
did you drop this book? or is it completed
I just noticed there is o ending
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