I’m ashamed I even lasted as long as I did. Too much sexual harassment, sexual assault, and flat out rape. Guys can justify this all they want, but as a girl, I can’t stand this crap.
Don’t tell me I didn’t leave a fair review. I gave appropriate stars for translation quality and stability updates. Other than that, this story was the worst.
read 55 chapters and I still don't know who is the mc David or Alexander lol
sorry i really dont know how to put my imagination into the story so i end it quickly so in the future i will make a good novel that going to be a top in any apps i hope sohehdh
love it and can't wait for the second season of the webtoon to come out
Sorry I’m a bit late, but this is the first book that has actually got me hooked in a long time :)
Quality: the writing quality is really good. Very few grammatical errors, spelling errors, plot holes, etc.
Updates: hasn’t been updated in a year, but maybe the book is just done , idk yet.
Story: it’s very cut and dry, while still being original, which imo is way better than a twist that’s been executed poorly.
Characters: funny, interesting, and believable. I found myself laughing at some of the many goofy interactions that happened between the mc and the other characters.
World: the world building is amazing. Everything that you need to know is fully explained in detail, while not feeling like an info dump. It gives the world depth, which really helped me get immersed in the world.
Thoughts: it’s srsly been a long time since I’ve read something this good, and I want to thank the author for this. Even tho it’s only 80 smth chapters, they were the best 80 smth chapters I’ve read in a long time.
Overall: 9.5/10
I liked the characters of this story.
but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events.
otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence.
I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.
please update more I can't take the wait
Interesting so far .Keep it up
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Nice work
Include more action with more details
Also add more dialogues ....it's fun that way...and
Plz update more often.
Can u add a character glossary too it's hard to remember all previous characters
Me likey. the MC is smart and uses his ability instead of being disgusted by it and not using it which is so irritating. And besides that its fun to read and something fitting my taste. hopefully the author will update more
Author keep up the good work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Juicy story. I like a lot. I also really want first review but I will update this as the story goes on due to the lack of content at the moment.