This novel has me waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad I never had to go to a place like this. Crazy hotel but who is the killer.
The story is so boring and looks like kids bedtime story that it makes me puke rainbows! Dropped at 26 chapter as I can’t take it anymore.
Qu’Ali of writing is good with some mistakes here and there.
Stability of updates I don’t know so I gave 5*
Story development... There is none! It’s so boring that it hurts. Started ok and that was the best part of the story. They are just training and talking. No action except 5 sentences fight with demon at the beginning.
Character are weak without personality, makes me even forget who is who as the author tries to give them different behavior styles but unsuccessfully.
World background. Is it bad or good I don’t know. Author explains that there is a lot of discrimination from nobles and demons and war and orphans, but there is no hardship in the story! The worst thing the noble does is speak harshly to Demi humans. Everyone is happy, well feed and even orphanage looks like living in a hostel. No demons no fighting no killing. Basically everyone sings kumbaya while holding hands. They are even so nice that they tell their team configuration and strong points to their enemies...
Waste of time.
Is not going to be long winded review, but the grammar could be improved and also his style of writing. But English is not his first language and I think I don’t have problem with that. I’m just trying to be honest here.
But let’s talk about the story itself. Marvelously crafted. Small details decorating the story to know and understand out character is not only one sided but has a human emotion. The world build is pretty interesting too. Sometimes you don’t have to tell everyone what’s going on but can actually show them what they have in the story. Like when the author introduces technology to the era where martial arts reigning supreme. Overall this could be really good story!
I like it very much
Don't you dare drop it
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Nice synopsis dear Author... it's quite simple yet so captivating. We all as writers have our own writing styles and techniques that can hook our readers yeah????Everything is on point, and I love how you decribe your scenes. Keep it up and you'll earn a fortune ???
Another Gem descarded by the website in favour of trash.
The concept the plot of the novel is great at least I liked it, just has some grammatical errors which will soon be fixed as the edited ones are underway. It's about a child named Lex builled the whole life and gets thrown off a cliff acquire the eye system. Although maybe op for for the current is actually not so op according to author as the universe and rest hasn't been explored, I advise you guys to read it, it's a bit more fresh than typical novels.
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the book was great and awesome and the character development was good also and the story development was amazing and we'll made and the writing quality was closer and nice
Dunno how i got so far. Anyway1st few chapter wallbreaking is ultra retarded - RETARDEDThe system apparently has a lot of options and they are only visible when MC DECIDES TO ENABLE THEM, and he only does so when he feels like or "he remembered"... As story progresses he keeps enabling more options that display rank and some other shit. why not enable everything? - pretty retardedMC is hunting sticks nonstop. All of a sudden 2 sticks appear, guess what MC does? HE SPEAKS TO THEM "Who are you?" LIKE WTF? DUDE u have been hunting sticks nonstop for so long and all of a sudden YOU FUCKIGN randomly decide to talk to them? (Reason he talked was because of the plot, he obv needed to talk to them...) - RetardedMC has like 10-20 skills. Right before "dying" HE REMEMBERED he had an OP skill that transforms all dmg taken to 1 hp. Yeah... he just remembered at the crucial time, and guess what, all the other skills were explained, but when this1 was mentioned, we never got to see what it does, and behold a couple of chapters later, HE REMEMBERS it and uses it in a crucial moment and readers go "WOOW, HE HAD SUCH A SKILL" well done author, that was retarded suspense. - RETARDEDMC sees an S grade (that should have -500 ish hp, but apparently still had a couple of hp somehow left) stick being killed by a stronger stick and he goes "w-w-w-who are you?" ... - RETARDEDMC meet Hiersomething, 10 minutes later blabs his secrets to her, how he is reincarnated etc - RETARDEDWhen MC decides to blabber his secret about being blessed by the goddess, mc asks the question back and then MC SAYS- "Lets say our answers at the same time" LIKE FUCKING little kids, god i cringed so hard while reading that.MC has major brain problems, constantly forgetting stuff, making irrational choices. The goddess brainfucking and changing things however she likes doesn't help the plot or the MC, he is retarded and stays retarded for as long as i have read - RETARDEDMC fights in a trial, 1st trial-10 rounds, half the them finished in one shot, the other half is explained as them all attacking using this and that, MC dodges! Use abilities and beats them. blah blah blah. 1st trial finished in 4 HOURS! 4 HOURS? THAT was maximum 30min. Apparently somewhere it was explained that sticks fight at a slower pace, but when the fights happen u CANT fucking tell that, fights are explained as all enemies can attack MC at the same time which means they are close or can move closer fast. anyway, it took 4hours apparently, insanity. -RETARDEDINHERITANCE obtained, MC has a full room of skills to BROWSE THROUGH, what does he do? takes the 2 skills he was there for originally and HE EXITS THE INHERITANCE and goes with the leader back to the alliance. EVEN THOUGH THERE WERE WHO KNOWS HOW MANY GOOD SKILLS. AAAND DOESN'T GO back there for a LONG time, and when he DOES, its again to LOOK FOR SPECIFIC SKILLS, he doesnt fucking look at all the skills and think if they are usefull, HE DOESNT even pick the passive skills that he shouldnt even worry about -RETARDEDFrom now on i guess spoiler warning?MC gets a skill fusion option from his system. STILL DOESNT GO TO INHERITANCE TO LEARN ALL THE SKILLS AND FUSE AND FUSE THEM FOR OP RESULTS. - RETARDEDOh right MC makes a clone. Makes it look like his old life... (yeah, he made him look the same as how he was instead of making him more handsome, or ANYTHING. EXCEPT. He increased his "drill" size. . . Yeah, author called his dick a drill and some other retarded name, my brain thankfully decided to erase at least 1 of them from my brain... But yeah, gotta increase dicks size but the rest stays the same. I mean how fucking boring is that, when u get a new life why tf would u want to look the same as you did., then again compared to all the other shit this is more just in my opinion.The big fight against the wolf stick. Oh god, it was written so badly, so cringe. the tactics so cringe, i couldn't bear to read them so i was skipping and skimming chapters. Dropped it at the point MC was showing off his awesomeness to EVERYONE around, yeah that's supposed to be the "climax