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Grammar. Please add some full stops cuz it difficult to understand where one sentence starts and another ends. Also speech marks when individuals are speaking.
please reconsider your decision...
your story is good , please continue post the New update story
I've read through this twice now, extremely excited for more and the only complaint i have is that there's not more of it.
This story has just so much potential and life to it and the premise is just so incredibly captivating, i really just wish there were thousands of chapters to read instead of hundreds.
5 stars. From the synopsis, I can already tell that it's a great novel.
annoying system... bbye good luck ..
sorry for 1star
Even though the plot is not that engaging....But For the mere fact that he is non-human and doesn't hesitate to kill humans i will give it 5stars..especially after all those non-human mc where they ALWAYS become friends with humans and even killing their own race to save humans...
Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name.
This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes...
The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'...
so to speak.
Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention.
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All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well.
They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details.
I was still new at the time but I am way better now.
so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD.
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*Phew*
Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine.
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(Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
Mc is a guy named ‘Eve’
The true question is not if it will be good,but is he FOR THE HORDE or FOR THE ALIANCE?And he really wants happy and comfortable life in WoW?You must be kidding me
I don’t like the way they put the game so unfair to solo players and poor ones.
Who would play this game? Only rich players?
Most gamers are not rich and just normal family and in an average salary.
Also, it’s only half an hour in the game and they are already in much advantage... then only beta testers are going to reign this world. New players can’t keep up and chase to early birds...
This game is so bad, unfair, and boring...
Only fighting and doing quest or PvP. No lifestyle nor something nothing to do with fights and quest.
People only liked the plot twist of the quest.
For the background, it’s bad.
Too much explanation and copy and paste author from his past chapters. (Repetitive sentences)
I don’t know if this edited or whatever, if it is then it’s bad.
Not bad I like the story and the characters, I love light novels about death, powerful main character and mainly where the main character turns in to a female, "gender bender"looking forward to the next chapter,