Hmm....This is me reading ML genre book for the second time.... and it’s marvelous. Really, the author did a good job.... I hope to read till the end... So, keep up the writing, author!!! best wishes
this story is absolutely amazing, you can tell the author cares and adores this project, from the power system, to the research he's done, to the world the mc lives in and to all the characters who feels like living breathing people with their own lives and motives. the grammar is probably the best on webnovel and the story is relatively easy to follow. only cons are that the first 25 ch are basically a parody, but it was fun in its own right and shifted to an original story as natural as possible, other con is that the first 40 chapters are info dumpy as all get out, but author fixes that relatively quickly, the pro of the info dumps is the author's immaculate descriptions of everything from characters down to what the character has in his hands, so even though it was a chore to get through, it added wonders to this world, I loved this story, the chapters are also hella long... you can also learn a lot in this story toops. don't expect too much in the way of action and powering up because it's mainly a slice of life magic teacher story who also has incredibly good righteous morals
I love detective stories. The author has written something with potential. My review is based on the first 4 chapters. We have the intro of a professional detective, then the mc becomes a detective.He gets his first case and begins his investigation. The pacing is decent and there are a lot of details everywhere. The only thing I dislike is like the forced romance at the beginning. Other then that it is pretty good currently!
chapters seems too short and story doesn't seemed to move up. It feels like while watching slideshow of pictures even before reaching the end you get stuck somewhere in middle. Seems unreasonable to wait day or two then purchase coins/passes to unlock a chapter and after end of each chapter feel like got kicked in stomach. Please either Increase how much story develops in single chapter or request application finance team to decrease cost for coin and increasing power of passes as at most single pass unlocks single chapter that gives readers nothing but fillers between main events.It would be nice to have one pass unlock multiple chapters.
Overall it's a unique and funny story and the best part is that the MC the demon lord is humorous and isnt Reincarnated or transmirgated or teleported to another world it does feel more unique than any other story because it's feels like being the NPC and when summons the otherworldly being it shows his emotions and his side to it and I want it to Update it's Yet the Greatest story I read and Author pls Update daily
I have always been a big fan of The King's Avatar since i first encountered it. I have even watched both the animated series and the live action series. I am very much looking forward to this new prequel novel.
This novel is from author of Warlock of magus world and carefree path of dreams, so you can expect logical, rational, smart and cautious mc. As author took inspiration from LOM so world building is pretty decent.....
Similar to author's previous work, main character seems to lack romantic feeling.
Focus of the novel is mostly on fighting and the MC's journey through the ranks with the help of some kind of cheat.
If you enjoyed author's previous work then chances are pretty high that you will enjoy this...
btw use coins to unlock at least 1 chapter to be counted as 'Fans' so they'd be pick this up quicker.
Way different from the typical system/game element novels. Has a thriller element that makes it very interesting and exciting. The Mc is also very cautious and not op. Basically a very refreshing story if you’re looking for a change.
Absolutely love this book.
The first 60 chapters were great.
I really hope that this book would get picked and will be able to update in the future.
Go fr it i love everything bout story plot fighting................................. Keep ur good work up
I cant wait to continue with the next chapter, I hope and hope the little boy survives. I will recommend this novel for my friends because it's a new story and the story line is far much different than other stories.
More ink to your pen writer
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