The only qualms i have about this novel is that the dialogue is so apathetic. its like robots talking to each other. honestly if the author worded it more appropriately, then it would have been fine.
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The synopsis is very interesting. The story plot is great and the writing style is very well written. The updates are steady and the characters are developed pretty well in each chapter. I like female lead stories. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!
I like it! he only just helped someone's poison with a dew flower, no names for spoilers, but my lordy there's constantly spelling errors. author seems to have a problem with the letter O cause they can't spell poison or even worst over and over without getting it wrong. overall though I like it, just work on it a bit more
