Honestly, author just **** up this novel. So many messed up profesionist. I mean cultivator why dont stick to path of cultivator, MC just turned into card wtf was that. And honestly mchine gun? Boxer? How can they fucking strong, and what kind of reain they did to become strong? Spirit enery? Mana?. Oh btw MC habe War God system right? Why dont depend on it to become god?
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I only managed to get through the first 6 chapters.... The grammar and syntax are beyond bad. The author miss-uses tenses a lot. Infact he interchangeably uses them in every other sentence. Even the average 6th grader should have a better grasp on atleast the 4 simplest and when to use them: Simple past/past progressive and simple present/present progressive. To the author: I am not trying to disparage your work but you are honestly not that gifted when it comes to grammar, either study up or get an editor to do the work for you. One last thing: even in the earlier chapter you are artificially inflating your wordcount. You are creating needlessly complicated sentences that no one understands and break syntax. Keep the sentences short, it will improve flow, you'll make less mistakes and the reader will in no way be confused.
Rusak bgt bos grammar nya. Kalo ndak niat perbaikin mending ni ya pake bahasa indo aja. Mo baca jadi mager gara2 otak rusak duluan mahamin english ente.
an actually worthwhile story hopefully it gets picked up............................................................................................................
I would cut one star from writing quality. But since I am giving five stars in other chapters, I might just give five stars in writing quality.This start is amazing, though some things are explained. It is a nice way to connect virtual reality with cultivation.Waiting for more chapters.....
Amazing !!! Its a very interesting world setting and though barely anything about the plot has been revealed it still managed to capture my interest !!!!Anyways I look forward to future chapters and I hope you don't drop this