The descriptive narration is what makes a book great to read. I like how the author wrote it in descriptive writing for the readers to imagine and help them grasp of what's on the novel. To readers who likes magic, Give this a read, everyone!
Interesting , it's a cool concept that has a lot of potential, 5 stars for the new author, the way Primordial essence was introduced was kinda random but that's fine, not much I can say after 2 chapters
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Oh well since this is my own book im giving it a full 5 star, i hope you give me your hinest reviews. I’m mot a pro so I might be making few sillu mistakes i hope you will notify me ans pardon me.
This review is at chapter 80:
So my gripes are similar to the others you see in the reciews, but I have a slightly different take. At chapter 25 or 26 the MCs intelligence for some reason takes a steep decline out of literally nowhere. From a veteran gamer who hoards loot just incase he can sell it, to an idiot who questions why his companion brings him an item he can sell, whilst he carries around a pack full of starter grade junk for that exact purpose. My issue isn't the stupidity, as I like character development, it's the reasoning.
The author obviously knows the MC is acting stupid, as he had his companion call him out directly for it by having her tell him to pay attention when he is told something and to think for himself. I simply find myself questioning, who is the author trying to develop/write for in this situation? It makes the MC seem mentally disabled, makes the companion seem like she nonstop complains, annoys the reader, and makes the author look like they can't write a decent character. I've found myself letting it audible sighs while reading.
All this being said, it's not enough to ruin the story for me, but I know it can for some which is why I explained so much. I see the potential and have heard it gets better soon, so I'll keep reading as most of the other stuff in the novel is quite good and leaves me wanting to see more.
Very basic Chinese style face slapping novel.
nothing interesting here.
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I started getting in to it and wanting to read more of it hopefully they write more to it. I feel it would be a shame to just drop it only after so few chapters. I have found a few that have done just a few chapters and stopped I truly hope this one won't be one of them.
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If I wanted to read Harry Potter I'd go for the original. This can only be called watered down fanfic attempt at mixing multiple stories into 1. Author also added the whole concept of hunters + a test that has the prerequisite of finding the place. The MC hides class in 1 chapter because it's important for safety, then goes and reveals it to random person on the other, just to again choose to hide it a few chapters later. Don't waste your time like I did!
This review is an extremely biased review. Read with caution. "System" is there so I gave it a 5 star. I LOVE SYSTEMS. I SHALL READ ALL SYSTEMS. ALL SYSTEMS SHALL GAIN 5 stars.. sorry got excited lol .. well yea. basically, its a system. :/
[Reviewed on: 06-03-2022]
[Reading status: 8th chapter]
[Strength: Face slapping, strong character development, fusion of two genres]
[Weakness: Well, according to me, it's super cliche cultivation novel]
- The title says it all, literally half of the expected plotline.
- A possibly weak-to-strong MC
- Cliche cultivation settings and world
- Magic, pills, martial arts are an expected part along with explicit scenes
- A lot of girls, cultivation, energy and the goal to get stronger
- However I personally felt that the initial chapters had nothing different to offer. It followed traditional formation and plot to set the ground.
- In the midst of ocean of eastern cultivation books what this one has to offer? The NPC theme from prior life seemed to be faded after transmigration, diverting back to old cliche plot.
If you're interested in eastern cultivation then this is for you.
[Additional remarks]
The author has improved visibly compared to his previous books.
The flow and pace is good, every scene execution is done wonderfully
Talking about grammar and stuff, don't worry over that.
Raw Name: 武功自動修煉：我在魔教修成佛皇
Chapters: 200+
Status: ongoing