Bosta . .
A must read.I was laying bored playing with my phone and saw webnovel popup on my Facebook downloaded it and browsed a few stories after coming across this one I am so a keeper of webnovel.This story is intense and well thought out for a moment it felt like it was a movie I was watching breaking down the detail.The characters are well explained and it made me curious about there capabilities and just as I anticipated the title lived up to the story well done Author a 10 star rating to you
This book REALLY needs someone more fluent in English proofing it. Great concept for the book, but the language makes it very difficult to continue reading.
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Really enjoyed this book. The characters are muti dimensional and interesting. reading number two in the series now. looking forward to more of this author's work!
No Yandere Tag? Such a dissapointment, but i will read, coz u are a legend and i really love your writing in 'The Conqueror Path'.I hope i can see the end of you work
Very interesting. I am intrigued in the sibling relationship and the MC's goals. I want to see what kind of plot the author has laid out.Writing Quality: I can see the quality of the writing and that you try very hard to edit. There is still small grammar errors, but overall content was prestine. I do have a pet peave for authors who tell action words, instead of showing the action. (Example: Sigh, *cough cough)Story Development: The pace of the story is perfect for this kind of genre.Character Design: I can see Zuifan's personality vividly. Just wondering if Chunu will have a big role because she seems invisible to me. Perhaps give her more descriptions. World Background: Good world building. So far the book is slowly explaining itself.
Haha op mc make dopamine go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
I'm just here to support . . .
Seems like a really cool hidden gem but before I start reading it, I have one single question.1. What is the character of protagonist? Is he evil or good. If any how much and where does his bottom line lay.
♡ Cultivation system with a OP MC. As long as the MC isn't overly boastful for no reason but to assert his dominance, the story will hopefully be enjoyable. ♤ However, considering the name of the systeme, it's definitely goind to be a face slapping novel. Moreover, the MC might not have to face any hardships which would result in no character development and the plot will go nowhere.