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Sigh... Dont waste your time, the first twenty chapters are like the walmart version of money heist although I have yet to read the other 20 I’ll be stpid if I pay for them..
i really like this novel. don't let the other reviews discourage you from reading this epic novel. its fire bro you should definitely give this a try
This is really a top tier book so far.
I didnt notice any sort of bad writing quality, but I am also not particulary picky.
Since there are only 19 chapters out atm, I cant really judge, but what I can say is, that the chapters are all VERY long. I really love that. They also dont feel stuffed or as if he tries to reach some wordcount, so I am happy.
Cant say much about the story yet, but so far its very solid. However, my only negative point with this is that there will be no romance according to the tags, which is actually a shame. I dont need a harem or anything, but a book is just not 5 Stars without romance. Maybe Author can be persuaded to add a romance of some sort?
Character design seems solid, they dont all have the same personality and seem to have realistic motivations and stuff.
The world background is very nice. I like the whole setting and the explaining of the world is certainly not dry. Some parts about the world are unclear yet, but I assume that the MC will find out or reveal it later in the story.
So, all in all, seems like a solid story so far. But for the love of god, PLEASE add romance. Doesnt have to be fanatic or smth, just some playful banter and stuff with a gf so he wont be lonely at the top.
OK, this is my second review on this novel, and although it is mostly the same thing as before, I have to say that the author's foreshadowing are worth looking into even if the start is somewhat horrendous whenever the Mc isn't around his parents or girlfriend. Overall, a great romance story, the author even being able to pull off a difficult tag such as harem thanks to his character creation abilities. Those guys grow on you like a fungus, but in a good way. The Mc himself is sometimes infuriating, but as you watch his thought process for longer, you will inevitably understand what the author is trying to make of the reader-MC connection. I could talk more about this or that development, but just the fact someone pulled those kinds of plot points successfully makes me want to femboy, nevermind the respect that blossomed from all the proper discussions and dialogs, which lead me to write this relatively long review and not want to hide it behind some block.
The same author who made Fate of Asertia. I like that the author has improved his writings even there are some things that needed to be fixed. But I believe he can improve more and besides all that, I really enjoy the story of this one and I mean it. Good luck on the WSA, author
So you telling me that the mc actually lost ALL OF HIS MONEY like how don't you at least have some secret money or some money in the bank or invested in something that can give you money because you are a pro gamer and you cant expect to be at the peak forever and should have a back up plan just in case you absolute toad
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at chapter 18 interesting so far.
but one big question isnt the main character in the summary a girl?? like Raven hasnt even appeared? or is it about Draven who is a boy?
Ngl came here to do a supportive friend comment , but it's actually so interesting to read and I genuinely enjoyed reading through the story so far it's got great ideas going into it already. Super cool :)
It is quite a nice novel. This is my first time reading a novel from the perspective of the male lead when the female lead is the one who got the second chance.
In novels with second chance you often wonder how the other characters think when encountering such a person who seemingly knows you inside out when having just met them. Well here you are. I would love to have it translated, so I hope it gets selected.
