gostei muito , acho muito fofo como ela tenta se aproximar da filha
I really like theme its not just martial arts and there's something deeper kind of thing.
the chapters are stable which is a plus.
overall great novel hope to see more chapters.
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The humor in this novel is great and I find the poems here quite interesting to say the least. However, I only managed to read up to 500 chapters since it has become so repetitive. Also the plagiarizing of the mc in this novel although still bearable for me, but I cannot stand his intense nationalism and racism. He make fun of other countries but say nothing to his own country and its people who as we all know the ones who are making things difficult for him.
This story has more potential than it is utilizing. It's a great concept but nothing is being developed. what the system is capable of and why he is devoting effort to it isn't properly explained. Mind you this is a review only based on content I currently have available to me. It jumps into simulations that he has 0 input on for the most part with seemingly random exceptions. The growth of the world is not explained well and might as well be jibberish with little to no real breakdown in the evolution of the world. This is not a review about this being a bad novel even though it sounds that way it has potential but was taken out of the oven to soon and is still a little raw.
There is nothing much to story. All the characters are one dimensional. the story even his girlfriend getting forced to another guy. There is only face slapping.
nothing else.
Fairly average novel, nothing really unique or outstanding about it so far.
On top of that, I especially dislike the fact that the translators are soliciting 4-5 star reviews in exchange for additional chapters. It just seems dishonest and manipulative, and I don't really feel like supporting that kind of behaviour.
Maybe in the future, if the novel starts to diverge from it's cliched and frankly quite boring story; and if the translators stop trying to manipulate the reviews, I will come back and increase my rating, but as it is at the moment I can't really endorse this novel.
** I would like to point out that I have no problem with translators asking people to give powerstones in exchange for extra chapters, as many other translators do so and in the end, if they are able to persuade anyone with this method then it's a testament as to how much people enjoy the story anyway, and is therefore not undeserved.
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It's an amazing story, I really like it, but what I have to complain about is TWO FAST PASSES PER CHAPTER??! That's just ridiculous, no matter the story.
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Well. This novel really turn me on.
I never gave an NTR novel more than one star but your first 2 arcs of the novel got me hooked before the third arc ruined it for me so 2 stars are the highest I can give an NTR novel and I don't mind you writing an NTR novel but plz set a tag beforehand.