Unresponsible translators, many empty promises made, but ends up delivering only 1 chapter a month! Several times this project has changed hands and recruited new translators, but every time nothing changes. The release pace is non-existant!
(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.
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i love this novel... being a strong bodyguard and assassin.. i just wonder who will end up with Lin Yi....Not less than five girls is sure a Headache
it got stupid real fast. The first few chapters were manageable till it made me feel like the author is high on something really dangerous for health.
Creation, oh my ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. The plotline is exciting, intriguing and most of all interesting. The Ml's character is a unique one and that's makes it all the more interesting keep it up, author!
Hey everyone.This will be a detailed review, in hopes that it would give you the push to read the novel.Written at ch. 110--------As a reader of the author's previous and first novel, Tale of the Void Emperor, I have to say, I am very impressed. The author's first novel is very unique in its own sense, however, it had mistakes in the beginning due to being author's first novel, later on, you would rarely see such mistakes.I took too long saying unnecessary things, but for me, I hsd to say those things because this novel actually has, in my humble opinion, more potential than the previous one.The idea is very unique, the power system is very well-written, not only that, but the writing style from chapter 1 to latest is very consistent with little to no mistakes at all.The MC, Aren, is a normal human being, not someone with future memories or anything, he's someone who has a goal of overcoming the disaster so that he would be able to live peacefully. He's not lame, he's smart, calculative, and above all, has a clear goal in his mind.As for the world building and side characters, author did a pretty good job, he didn't do any info dumping, but introduced everything once it appeared, explaining it in a way that wouldn't bore the reader. The side characters are given their own time to grow not like other novels where MC meets friends and they are thrown in the background and forgotten. There aren't a lot of them introduced right now since (Spoiler)...Author is currently updating at a rate of 1/day, however, he's planning to increase that soon.Finally, the novel isn't filled with a lot of fillers, other than first 10 or 20 chapters since author had to do some world building.------Anyways, this is it for my review, hope I didn't take long.
Please keep going! Why the update suddenly stopped???,*******†**************"::";";";""!;";";";"!!""!"!"!!"!!"!!"!";_;;;$$;$;$;;"";;"";";";!"!
Shameless author review here.This is first time writing a sports novel so don't expect this to be a super novel although I am a super football fan so I am sure of what I am doing.My grammar isn't great but I'm pretty sure it's readable and I try my best to minimise errors.Drop any questions you need answers to?
Shame. It had a great start. So much potential yet author ruined it with his bs martial shenanigans. The mc basically has op stats and equipments and the author repeatedly mentions how important it is. But suddenly all of this martial experts come out od nowhere and basically trashes the mc's guild throwing all of his efforts in the trash. The author also often times forgets the mc's buffs and makes him have a hard time fighting against fodder opponents, but strangely he can solo a dungeon boss just fine? We're here to read a novel about an mc kicking ass and being awesome, please stick to that.
The first two chapters got me hooked! Can’t wait to be done with it and give better reviews ?
can't wait for more update!!