Of you want something new, something refreshing and interesting this is the best one you can find. Of course, there are mistakes here and there but I find this novel pretty intriguing!?
Imma just go ahead and leave a review even though there arent many chapters. So far this is pretty good, I like the gacha system and the grammar is pretty clean. I do like how the MC is working towards the core formation realm and then setting up a sect. He isnt given a run down sect nor a cultivation base at the beginning. I dont mind that he drew a rare cultivation method which alloes him to level up faster because it was his first draw and those draws are always luckier than others. Anyways, thanks for taking the time to write this novel Author. ?
I really like your book, especially the word twists? you’re doing good author keep it up, I barely found faults but you can still do better?❤️
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From the interesting synopsis, the unique writing style, and the characters being introduced and written differently from each other, this novel has some really good setup in the first few chapters! I can't wait to continue reading!
It looks like Stargate I UP VOTE !!!!I miss you Stargate Universe, i hope a fan while help make a sequel... Sad we miss the 3rd saison, but perhaps they are all dead and this is the end.
It was good to see that Yeman was able to adapt to the system right away, but I guess it felt like he accepted the matter too easily? Also, Yeman's character is not established, like he has no prominent traits except for his occasional raging. Also, his history with Marie was quite abruptly narrated. This history has a bearing in the story, so I was hoping that it could be described a tad more confusing. I guess the first three chapters will be confusing if the reader doesn't know that the MC was transmigrated. I appreciate the detailed action scenes which compensates for the short chapters. I love Mina, by the way. She's feisty and such a badass! The pacing of the story is just right, but I think that the MC's improvements as a player was too slow in the beginning. Then suddenly, his growth became exponential. It's kind of following the usual progression of a transmigration light novel. :( He doesn't use his resources wisely and keeps on being saved by his teammates. [I'm really sorry for saying these mean things. I just want you to improve as an author, along with me too! ]There are a myriad of grammatical mistakes. (Sorry if I'm going technical) However, note that grammatical mistakes are easy to correct. We all make this mistake, so don't worry about it. Incorrect verb tenses, misuse/absence of punctuation marks are the majority of these. I'll be cheering you on! You clearly have a good world background. I hope that these criticisms will motivate you to do better. Remember that nobody is perfect, as all things should be. We should always find a way to improve! Please continue writing this art of yours!
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Im putting 5 stars just for the idea of this novel. And looking at the few coments i read i don't think i will change this review after reading this.
A good story with fast story development that l like and enjoy. The mc is also been woven amazingly and is not some hero complex **** head. Some other characters in background has capability to improve story further and they some time do that too.
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