Too Shy To Love You

Really enjoying this book

Please write more chapters for us, oh great and mighty Author Sin!! ? We, your fans and devoted patrons, miss reading this masterpiece of a book!!

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The author has a great writing style. An expert in my view. It was what I currently lack at the moment. And your story is captivating! A recommended read for me!

This is the worst slice of life novel. Nope, it’s not even that. This reads like an high schoolers journal. Read this at your own disappointment!

(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.