It´s an really interesting story, and has a high potential, but the writer still needs much more practise.
The scenen changes are too quick and comes almost unannounced.
Most of the time I am thinking, "What is now going on?" only to find out that there happened a scene change.
The characters are partly interesting, but to plain and especially the MC is a bit unsteady in his behavouir. First he wants not to be used, then he goes with the flow just because of something.
What´s the most unnerving ist the too quick development. Parts aren´t really good explained and not as exciting as they could be.
Especially i would wish that the parts in them something gets explanied to other characters, like where they explain that he got that invitation in chapter 40, would a bit more elaborate.
The last thing is the grammar, there are a lot places where there should be comma´s and so on.
In the end it is really good material for an good story, but it got bad realised..
As I am the author of this book I am going to shamelessly say that this book is the best. Wanna prove me wrong read the story and give your suggestions
All stars we need more Revered Insanity Fanfics..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is the kind of story i liked.call it bias or whatever..i hope the writer can get back to the story at hand and continue giving chapters
And now we're talking about detectives. I LOVE DETECTIVES. This should be worth more than a thousand reads! The writing on the synopsis alone is very well written. But I hope the chapters will be balanced—solving cases and well, romance. Continue writing, author!!
good book went a fast though but enjoyed it and craving for some story Arc toowell it could be a bit of like other novels but still a good read
Well I cant give a five star but here goes my heartfelt summary. .. I salute to the people that has been with this book since it was created. .. .I really wish I had the patience like you people but alas I am impatient. .. .. ... .. SPOILER WARNING. ... ...FOR THE LAST 5 chapters my heart swelled with different kinds of emotions.. ... but they had a similarity to when I 2ws watching Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit: The Battle of five armies and Avengers Endgame.. .. . In the latest chapter. ...Oooh how I beg all the gods despite being an atheist that author would have a happy ending. ... .Alas I am now depressed. .... But dont mind my Rant author. .... If you are still reading your messages. ... .. I only pray you finish this story. ....and A confirmation that you will, will help relieve my anxiety. .. .Please I beg you. .. .. Finish this story and dont leave the people who are reading in the gutter
I really like this novel. sorry i cant go into more detail as I barely do reviews but its good so you guys should read yes indeed you should.
Isn't this book already translated by exiled rebels scanalation. Did u take permission? ....................................