Hello author I wanted to know if that Mc will become stronger in the future? And what about him being fat, I understand that this would is reverse but will he at least become lean and muscular?
The only thing I think you could improve the discriptoin it's a bit lacking but the book is amazing
This here is a very good novel. Good Job Author!! It has got the sense of wanting to know the world as you read on and on. There is some cultivation things going on. Some mystery here and there,
Overall, it's not perfect but it is definitely worth a try!
If you want to the mc an op ability, at least make the world and the other characters interesting. Giving the mc such an ability where he has no struggle, makes the story get boring very fast.
i really picky about novel
it's not about the genre or the concept, it's about the mood
i just feel like this kind of sign in novel matched with my mood
and i've read so many pet novel so fk it.
um and, i hope outdoor webcast get picked :3
I dropped at chapter 1 dialogue is terrible
and inconsistent
the cat says MC is a great artist then says he is d class
and c class being able to draw a perfect picture ( totally idiotic due to paintings and drawings being based upon a person's perspective and it's history)
Cover and synopsis looks nice with a reasonable update stability. Good writing quality and brad story and world background. Characters seem original too. Nice.
good story so far keep up good work .......................................................
5 staRs for encouragement. Hope You won’t DroP it.
complete waste of novel concept. terrible dialog and extreme cringy and not cringy in the cool chuni way.. this novel is complete trash and a disgrace to CCS
Just a copy and paste of the previous tunnel novels with new setting and characters. So it isnt really that good. If it was the first tunnel novel on this site it might be good. but now its just recycled
Not to toot my own horn too much, but I think this novel I've written is very good at making characters feel real... The ironic twinges of humor about their own situations is something that lots of people do, humor and tragedy are the same... The inky difference is timing and tone. It's also very morally grey, but not the kind a lot of people are used to in fiction.