After reading 3 chapters I found this story interesting.Definitely will come back.
the story itself is fine although the world background needs work but the translation quality is just not acceptable for a paid book.
if it was a free book i wouldn't complain but if i'm paying to read a book, i expect the grammar to be stellar.
just consider how much you actually spend, 1$ for 4 chapters, thats about 28$ just for the currently available chapters. 25$ for 100 chapters that'll be hundreds of dollars for a subpar translation thats sometimes difficult to make sense of, and that is disregarding the actual quality of the book itself.
for reference the complete harry potter book series will cost you 70$ for printed books.
spoiler alert!!This book will grab you by the neck and pull your pants down. The romance in this book is not to much, but prevalent, followed by a sense of adventure all in all a great book you should check out !
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Idk if this has fake reviews because of the ammount of spam, but so far, this is the novel that I'm looking foreword to the most. Though the novel is cliche, the way that things are done are just too perfect. I heard if this gets into top 10 you'll release twice a day? I'll support the novel.
it's a bit early to write a review, but some readers didn't really see the story and strategy of the story. like reader write "The MC is alone on his island, without company, and he summons monsters that allow him to defeat other humans who are neither friend nor foe, they simply exist somewhere outside. His only company are the invocations and strange voices"
well you are very wrong my friend, if you read the potential and how the story is writing, you maybe will see your mistake.
the MC Richard, is not alone at all, in the beginning he has already have a company of 100 resident that he can talk to, and there no. will grow a lot in the future, what you read until now is only the start, and if you read the Synopsis of this amazing novel, you will read a few of the characters that will join him much later in the story like:
Desert Pharoah, a Demonic Scorpion King, a Mechanical Giant, a Demon Baron, a Blood Archduke, a Five-colored Evil Dragon, and a Fallen Angel.
in my opinion the Author, and the translator and editor add a lot of heart, thought, planning, and hard work in to this novel. we didn't read a great story(novel). i hope it will be pick up, even if not it is a big lose for us, we can see how hard work the translator and editor pot in this novel. thank you so much guys :)
the lack of editing in this novel is disappointing.
was such a niche genre.
had all the potentials to be a gem but been riddled with the mass of people who likes to give opinions about mc all around him.
a mashup of,
young master cliches
Mommy
lying trough (whatever it means)
the monsters are actually the most interesting part of this novel and make it unique among others.
if it just cuts up the excess waste of fillers of every non-named NPC talks, it would have been a much better novel.
I'll skim around for a few more to find that interesting part alone.
The story is solid if a little bit cliche at times, sprinkled with some twist here and there.
Character driven story is the theme of this novel instead of plot driven one. There are no adversary for self reflection the MC would face as his system practically make him Basketball Jesus. The conflict would be outside the court most of the time. This can be considered a weakness of the novel, or it's strength from a different point of view depending on the author skill to write such character.
Although I fear a chapter so short for once a week release in the future after it catch up with the NBA arc would hamper the story. Rule of thumb, if you can see a chapter ending by a scroll from the bottom of your phone to the top most part, it might be too short all things considered.
Creative imagination is excellent. The way the author vividly writes Qai' s learning and the places he travels is fabulous. It triggers my imagination also. Thank you for sharing a wonderful story...
Hello this the Author . Thanks for reaching this fanfic . Try to donate some power stone As we will do a mass release of whole 20 chapter for every 100 stones
Have you ever loved a story but had moments where you absolutely hated the main character and his stupidity? This is that series for me. .
"hidden evolutian" yet in the end only using already eksisting templete. bird go to phoenix. lizard, fish and snake go to dragon. fyi "dragon likes snake" not "snake likes dragon", because dragon is just imajinary creature based on snake.