Oh anyway, thanks for saying it, I know it's not on the same level as my house of horror, I'll have it as a reserve novel
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Update pls.. whats wrong about the story?? Others judge the author but they are into the story for they can critisize the MC.. Lucky bastard though..
it took an abrupt turn when they suddenly get into a weird senior brother relationship to making sexual cultivation jokes, kissing and showing affection when shes not even 14-15 every 5 seconds of the chapter like can yall chill for a bit. the story kinda got so repetitive especially now that im at the chapter where she made clones so they be having the same teasing conversations over and over again idk
Meh. It was good in the beginning and it still is good but the apprentice thing was kinda useless. I'd have preferred her to travel alone with the beasts.
I like what the story has so far. I like the power system its vety unique. And the world it self seems fantastical. I like the old man. This story has potential but i do feel like things are moving very far. Maybe pace it better
It's pretty alright.. though I donno why there's not many ppl reading/supporting it... it was good time pass nd writing quality is good enough so here ya go...ig most ppl want a fanfic of a already exsisting verse then its not that
This is the type of book I’m looking for on this app.. I love this book.. and I love the story
Writing Quality is standard, which sadly most novels fail to reach, with minor mistakes that the author seems to eventually fix/will eventually fix.
Can't complain about the stability of updates, with chapters coming out quick and consistently.
The story is developing well, it's not as slow as I was dreading but it's not fast either. Good pacing.
Character Design is alright, minor issue of the character feeling shallow although I can't precisely pinpoint why that is. Perhaps it's because there is not much history known about the character and he doesn't seem wise so far however the novel is still new, got far to go and development could end up being able to compete with the best of them.
World Background is mediocre at best, we so far know there are 2 worlds, 2 villages, 2 cities, a random kingdom the MC isn't in, 2 towns and a forest. We know very little about all of it by chapter 119 but as before the novel is still at the start of everything, it can improve.
Sorry for the crude review, not experienced in them, just thought I'd give an honest opinion rather than "5 stars great novel".
i really like the plot and the personalty development of MC
and only thing i want is that he kills *ay*
Author please heed my words kill her in the most dreadful way possible
Hello, everyone, it's the author here to drop an appreciation review after reaching 300 chapters, the novel didn't start out well but I'm doing my best to tie up all loose ends and I hope you guys are seeing it get better, a big thank you to everyone for all your support, that's the main thing that keeps me going.
After reading all the other reviews I'm not sure if it is just me, but the novel feels kind of bland and lifeless.