It's a bit early to tell the direction of the story. I'll cover the things so far.
Writing quality is decent and has improved from the 1st chp. It's easy enough to read. No off putting errors or anything. But it can definitely be better and made more engrossing.
As for the story, I wouldn't say there are no clichés but things are resolved quickly and it doesn't drag down the story. Like I said before, it is still early but there's lots of potential to make an interesting story.
This is something I hope the author focuses on. Developing important characters not just the MC. I also feel that mc jumped the gun too quickly in the killing the entire family, he doesn't have a strong reason to kill the innocents as well or even torture the family head. His father's situation wasn't right, but the mc's retaliation was too much too quickly. Not enough development for that sort of thing. Objectively the family considered his father easily replaceable, only a few were directly responsible for their suffering.
Author could still fix that playing on MC being inexperienced and hot-headed back then because frankly since the mc isn't insane there isn't enough development to make him so cold and ruthless from the get go.
World background is slowly being built, I hope it's done intricately and interestingly.
Story
I won't give you any spoilers but I would encourage you to read this book if you're up for mysteries. It has a great plot and will keep you hook from chapter to chapter, take it from me it really happened.
I’m so in love with this novel and can’t wait to read more . From the characters to the setting and plot twist is captivating and intriguing
I love the character Noboru and how he changes from a naive, innocent boy to a savage. The red and black omni energy seems deadly, and the red-haired girl watching him is interesting. You make it so easy to hate the kingdom and Noboru's family, apart from his grandpa. I can't wait to see who this Shin is.
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
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I had read this story long ago on a different website. based on the context of this story having words cut off at the end of chapters. plus stories having completely different contemt after chapter 42. i think this story was copied then brought in a completely different direction.
https://creativenovels.com/novel/indomitable-oathbreaker/
This is where I read it previously.
The book is so aweeeeeeeeeesommmme.
I'd shamelessly promote and recommend another book I love. who?¿ by Khenny Esther.
You should check it out when you have time, not of this genre but really interesting
It sucks that it will only let me rate this 5 stars. This novel is at least 6/5. It breaks the bound of a mortal book and has become a divine one. This is my gospel. To read this novel was the reason I was birthed on this earth. Amazing, simply amazing.
A quote from this novel "Sometimes, listening to someone's problem is the best way to help them." that quote made me learn something new! it's indeed a slice of life genre. I F-ing love it!
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