Rayleigh an old man with a violent past now leads a quiet life. But when he hears that his family and home were destroyed, losing him his only grandson, He returns to the world with only a single purpose. Vengeance.
There is alot happening at once, And the story is moving very fast. I'd like to see more please update update update update update update some more.!!!!!
Let's see how it goes, i like a good revenge story and this seems to be it. The MC is smart and seems to be moving with intention. I also think what you are doing with the round table is so cool.
I like what the story has so far. I like the power system its vety unique. And the world it self seems fantastical. I like the old man. This story has potential but i do feel like things are moving very far. Maybe pace it better