hello guys... I'll shamelessly give myself a 5 star... i just wanted to say that i use first person perspective here in this story for it to be immersive. however, i think that i will switch to third person perspective soon, i don't know but i will try it, it may be better, i think..... and i will try to lengthen each chapter because i fell that it is too lacking and feels rushed... so, yeah that's all.. ohh i still want to add that this is my first work and i am not that good in English. so please bear with it. thank you... don't forget to like
After posting a review I had decided to check the previous reviews and saw that author and friends(or just him on alts) have spammed 5 star reviews on the book. The book is extremely trash, so for author to pretend it is good to bring in readers is sickening. Everything about the book is trash and the author isn’t an exception to this. I checked his previous novels and this isn’t even the first time he’s done this. The book is bad so please don’t waste your precious time reading it
In the beginning - Short, heavy, free
50 Chapters later - Short, H E A V Y, free
When only ten chapters are left - Short, HEEEVVVVVVVVYYYYYYYYYYY, premium
10/10
whoever translated this novel did a terrible job. i could not make heal or tail of most of the sentences. a lot of issues with gender pronouns.
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There is some interesting things but at most mediocre character design, bland world background. Has no interesting and somewhat robotic character development. It has some potential if you are bored out of your mind. But I would say pass.
This is nice! I will be expecting hard time for this one.
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The writer has a wide thinking area. Good novel. Love from Haryana, India. Keep it up my friend. You'll encourage many more who are willing to write.
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Everyone suppose this guy, he's trying his best to post chapters for you to view.