_MrMoon_
Maybe I'm biased but I quite like virtual reality gaming books, and this one has a unique twist in that its not based on some fantasy real but on the real world. I don't think I've ever seen a book do something like this and its so cool.
Imagine all the places that will be added in the future too! Imagine chernobyl landscape where they have to fight mutated monsters or they discover cthulhu underwater and they have to go in and nerf him.
Okay maybe I'm getting too excited, but imagine the possibilities! There's far too few chapters to get the full picture right now but what I see is good.
The grammar and details are all there too, i'd really love to see if they go on to have bigger weapons like tanks, missile launchers, sniper rifles etc but thats for later chapters.
Author should update more XD
Keep up the good work
Amazing !!! Its a very interesting world setting and though barely anything about the plot has been revealed it still managed to capture my interest !!!!
Anyways I look forward to future chapters and I hope you don't drop this
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best!
The story is perfectly designed and scenarios are easy to imagine and honestly speaking I loved the way it was written. The plot is awesome and got me hooked to read more. Good luck on future chapters author and fighting!!
Author broke his own world building in charter 1, had to correct by massively increasing the power of other characters to compensate, notices that that didn't work because MC is immortal and now has to somehow weaken the MC while not taking away his cheats.How someone who has traveled back in time and is immortal doesn't at least quadruple anyone in level at day 2 is the question, which the author answers by making the MC as low IQ and EQ as possible.
"Beautiful women are no exception"Author chan just wants to attract readers with this type of lines ??But will this have a lazy and tired protag who just wants to rest in peace? ??
????????????????? lol the last part was too funny...hmmm my interest is piqued, hopefully it's good.......................
please if you are not intentionally plagiarising this work, attribute the original work in the synopsis, the real name of this novel is Invincible Conquerer. Thanks
the beginning was fine but later it is 99% the same as any cultivation novel ;-;................................................................................................ (Google translator)
The characters are introduced and devolp in a terrible way. Every explination about his knowledge is basically “magic” and because hes rhe main character. Also the authors Syntax almost gave me an aneurism trying to read his story without speedreading to force my brain to autocorrect the grammer.
Waiting for chapters ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest
