I don't have much to say except that it's pretty interesting imo.
Those who liked reading The Author's Pov probably would probably like this a lot as well.
Ahem, it's the author here...
Well, as all of you might have noticed, I have quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in my novel. I am really trying to solve them but there are still some that I miss. English is not my first language so it's a little bit hard...
So I wanted to apologize for making so many mistakes. Thank you for your understanding.
Amazing chapter, I really enjoyed the fight scenes. Glad B.A.D kinda redeemed himself, I hope the heroes aren't to hard on him. I feel like anyone in his position would of done the same. But as usual I really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait for the next one.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now.The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet.The last point is that this story isnt predictable at all .Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.
My first novel in this web, so far so good. I recommend this to anyone who like fantasy novel...........................................................
The story line resemble the movies jumanji 2, but it automatically challenges the author to write something familiar yet very different. I can say only after reading the first 4 chapter that author have done a great job.
Genuinely disappointed in this story. It started out good, imo, but honestly goes downhill fast once the 10,000 races are introduced. MC starts killing off entire races and crowd commentaters are instantly heard and responded to. Broad generalizations are made, indicating all sentients in a group are thinking/responding in the exact same way. Old humans are behaving like immature teenagers. Final straw for me was the MC killing, cooking and eating one of the 10,000 races in front of the area they all live. That whole scene is just too disappointing for me to continue investing my time in this story when there are tons of other stories better worth my time.Translation is okay, I’ve read a lot worse ones and bore with it for the story.World setting is decent and I like some of the side characters.So… overall, 2.5/5.0.
The power spike right from the start is just too much to keep this story intresting. You may like this story if op mcs are your thing but I will have to,pass on this on.
Worst garbage ever written on this site. The author must either have quite a few loose screws on his brain and a huge masochist. The storyline and tragedy level is literally cancer. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger? Would've wished he died and stayed dead in the beginning for this piece of turd work.
This.... is a very "meh" story.
Plot: The main character can't really decide on a clear, long term goal, even by chapter 30+. It doesn't need to be super realistic, any goal is a good one.
Translation Quality: Readable, but the translator translates without much care to be honest. There was a joke referencing one of the character's names, and the translator didn't even bother explaining. It left the readers very confused, and looked poorly done.
Character design: Meh. I mean, main character is like, "Let's slowly induce a change of character compared to old soul in this body!" Proceeds to do almost everything very different. "I'm going to treat my sister like a daughter!" Near constantly flirts with her (they aren't blood related though).
Just.... an annoying read all around. The action scenes are very.... poor too, it's all a blur, and you can't even tell wtf is happening half the time. I can't tell if it's an author or translator issue. All I can say is, there are better stories out there, this one does not have my vote for next to be fully translated.
Pursuit of the Truth, Renagade Immortal, I Shall Seal the Heavens, A Will Eternal. i dont know what to say just add to library. but 2 chp per week dude thats a torture.
I recommend strongly this one !!