The Song of Swords

My first ReviewI understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough.After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example:captian instead of  The captianyoung man instead of a or the young man said...Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:""Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel.Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.

Hahahahaha.... It is indeed really amusing..The story (aside the sexual content) is really really amazing.The plot is unpredictable, I like the way the author give the change in his storyline, and it makes me wonder what happen next..

Read a few chapter already.. nice ongoing plot u have here author... But can u please at least give the female lead a decent guy to love... Waiting more interesting chapters to come.. ????

typical hiding M.C...if u jst keep on hiding why are you getting angry...u are a trillionare why are u still going to class ??? #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ

What sort of Chinese corruption is this? There were plenty of other novels in trial read that had much more support then this novel. This novel will eventually fall into obscurity, they could have atleasted picked a novel that was better received, but we got this.

A good storyline  Can't wait to see how LSR develops. The book is filled with so much thrills and cliffhangers. Please more updates I'm already hooked