hi author I'm new here hehe. so, as I was reading your story I seem to encounter a lot of redundant words in a single paragraph like 'because'. it's ruining the flow of words, can you kindly avoid doing that in the future? thanks in advance. anyway, I'm still below chapter 50. good day.
Good novel.
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Oh This Sound Cool I Wonder If It Will Be Like The Others I Choose Which WAS DENIED BECAUSE IT WASN'T ROMANCE OR CULTIVATION, SERIOUSLY WEBNOVELS? Sure The Reader Awaiting For It Was Not Comparable To The Absolutely Garbage Cultivation Novel(No Offense) Was Released, BUT PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD GIVE US SOMETHING UNIQUE
This was difficult to read. The story felt bland and lifeless. It was generic, cliche and poorly done. The characters are so one dimensional that it was a waste of time giving them names. I didn't find a single redeeming feature for me to continue reading.
Inb4 5 star bots.
finished chapter 20. the use of words in writing is not easy to understand.
too quickly change POV, and lack of further explanation.
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For anyone who wishes to read this novel, IT IS NOT IN ENGLISH. I'm not sure why the synopsis is but the book itself is not. I hope the author can translate this to English or find someone who can help them do this
This actually has some real potential in it! I just love the way the author puts up a new mystery and holds up the attention of the readers. This novel also reveals the author's obsession with astral body, supernatural powers, mythology, and blood. There is a lucid yet ambiguous thrill in it (sounded like an English teacher
does it have raw
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Don't walk away from this one....RUN! The summary forgot to mention he is in a modern world and likes to stream his deductions... A large chunk of the chapters is the viewer comments. So many of this kind on trial...not one selected as far as I can remember.
Come on man, your locking chapters that have already been translated by someone else behind a paywall with no guarantee that you are going to be translating any further. At this point, I am nearly sure that you just used the other translator's work and tweaked a few words here and there for every chapter.
good novel would like to see a continued hasn't been updated for a while I hope that the author comes back with more of the story. definitely a harem web novel if you enjoy harem's this is for you.
A great story with an interesting beginning that somewhat provided a plausible explanation for the change in the world. An MC that has had to suffer and get through challenges and become better. I would love the release of new chapters to be faster as this is a captivating story with a great world build and character introduction and development. The translation needs to be brushed up but in light of how fabulous the story is it can be forgiven and overlooked.