the author lacks a brain cells for example at chapter 2 when the MC is fighting the ghost apparently they are servants outside and yet none of them hear the fights the scream and everything and they only show themselves after the fight, the author only wants to show fhat the mc is rich and he has a useless servant.
even when the hoe is using him his still happy
why the author is not updating?..........
The problem with this work is not even the author's laziness, after all, everyone knows he's going to write an action paragraph and the rest will just be the audience reacting. The author who incorporates the audience in his works must have common sense.
This story is quite nice.
Don't be afraid at the beginning about how most of the story is him upping his skills, you see it less often the further you go.
It is quite a light-hearted novel and is simply nice to follow, the MC isn't a shameless brat, nor is he conceited thinking he can take over the world.
I recommend it to those who wish to read a nice and cool story, without much drama and such.
I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.
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no NTR right?
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so, no more updates??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hello everyone,
It's the author here.....hmm, I have a humble request to all who come here to give me a review.
If my book disappointed you anyway then I'm sorry but plz don't stress yourself to give me a review.
Because your 1 and 2-minute reviews can take my whole day of learning......l know my book contains a lot of errors but we all are human and learn throughout our whole life.
life is a beautiful gift of the creator plz don't spread negativity that riin someone's whole day.......stay positive and healthy
( criticism is good and I wholeheartedly accept it. it's you right to do so .....plz don't be too harsh with words)
thank you....
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Overall i rate it 4.5 its kinda good in my opinion and i also recommend reading it but its only my opinion there are some who disagrees.....
The plot of the story is compelling, and it is off to a good start. The Mc is interesting despite being called incompetent; he struggled a lot but yet he survived. The author uses good grammar. I'm eager to see how the story progresses.
Best of luck!