I really liked this story. It draws you in as you read it. The flow of the story is very nice. And the storytelling is very clean. Congratulations to the author, this story made me laugh and kept me reading non-stop. It was never boring and it was enjoyable. It was a pretty good story. Congratulations again
I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ?
sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.
Writing quality: It's better than what is expected of a newbie author. The only improvement needed is that author must work on conveying things in a much clearer and better way and keep things subtle and to the point.
Update quality: Not very good. Author should upload more frequently. Atleast 3-5 chpts/week so that us readers stay connected and don't have to suffer from waiting for too long.
Story development: There are only a few chapters so cannot comment much on it. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, atleast that's what I can tell from the available chapters.
Character design: It's good as of now. I can imagine the characters the author describes. The only point of criticism here is that author must reduce the narration a bit and have side characters as well as main character interact a little more.
World background: Like I've said in story development, there are few chapters so cannot comment much on the world building aspect.
All in all, it's a good read for all readers who are into sci-fi genre. A good novel with good potential. Keep up the goodwork author :)
I should say I didn't know what to expect from this book... the concept of heroes and villains made it seem like we were going to follow an MC with powers... This raised my curiosity and then the author plunges us into this thrilling kind of situation with lives on the lines.... I was amazed.. the character description is top notch as well as the world background and narrative... can't wait to see where this goes...
Good job Author
from the description, it seems the legions time traveled to the time of third crusade.[img=recommend] I'm hypedd!
The novel is good, but it would be better if during the period the phone came in contact with the radiation, the portal and the phone combined, allowing him to enter the other world through the phone portal.Because a smart person can think of why he bought that mansion.
Absolutely love it, have yet to find any problems with it. .............................................................................................................
If u like sci-fi novels, this book is for you.Mc is in a future Earth where people are fighting with mecha and trying to save the world.A system that controls your mood, which is something new and creepy.Keep up the good work. ❤️❤️❤️
Whoaaahhh!! It seems like this book is going to a bang!??? I'll check 'em out and give a review if I like it.. . . .
For me this novel isn't really that much i mean there's really nothing new probably a couple of things maybe but all in all there's nothing new about this novel in particular and honestly i would have been okay with that because let's be real it's so rare for us to find a new world building or a new concept with this type of novel.
The story line is pretty fast if you ask me, like he'll encounter enemy after enemy he just don't know how to rest. and after defeating that enemy he'll move to another place and have enemies right away like damn let him rest b!tch.
for character building there's not much to tell because the only character building that we have is basically the MC the rest are pretty much ready made cabbage. idk man i just feel like the side characters just wasn't as develop as they should bcoz of how fast the events are taking.
for romance, im not gonna say much because i might say some spoilers and we don't want that, the romance was just so random there's not even relationship building that was going on, because of some incident boom there you have it romance b!tches. it's not harem so far and i doubt it will be a harem.
i know y'all might think that all I've said are bad things that just only bcoz I've read this type of novel before and it's kinda tiring already, when i read novels like this i would always look for a good world building and character development that would at least makes me feel attached to the story. anyway all in all it's an okay novel for me, if you're bored and hàve nothing to read you should check this out maybe we just have different taste in novels or maybe you are new to this kind of genre.
Great potential until the MC decided to lick humanity's ass and be their pawn.
Bullied boy, hates society, etc etc. As a wolf all of that is irrelevant because you know..forced plot must happen. Just..Author, please try to know that if you pick a monster MC, at least try to stick with the monster part. Or just name it "The Divine Wolf..." and stop there. Just remove the or cause that's all he is. A pet. A waste of a novel idea.
Im disappointed, after one evening and 200 chapters:
-ultra short chapters thats filled with 1/3 of stats spam, some parts ive skipped bcs of bore content
- this game is more like cultivation novel than vr game
-side characters are like not existant
-as i see lates uploads dates (chap 330) not very stable
-i see you shadow hack