It's starting to get irritating...ML is stupid despite being genius in other things ?the story pace is very slow...I really it at first but now I'm having trouble if I want to follow this story ???
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Raw title: 私人定制大魔王Status: 376 chapters (Ongoing)...........................................................................................
Keep it up Siyam_Haider I'm livin both books. :)
This is a great story and is a solid 5/5 till now for me .....also this is my first time writing a serious review that goes to show how much I like this book.....I have tried to break down and review the story elements by myself and here I go—1)Plot—>Firstly the plot is well thought out and well paced and it is also mostly realistic.The author has tried his best for accommodating the sci-fi aspects of the story which is believable (if you want to believe cuz that is as far as it goes in fictions).2)Characters—>The characters are mostly likeable and there is heavy character development that is necessary and believable because the genre is ‘apocalypse’.Most people change when their survival is threatened but it cannot be abrupt and has to have a trigger and a period of change, this is something that the author has shown.Not all characters are supposed to be black and white and they have to be dynamic and changing which happens in this story and this is a plus for me.3) System——>Finally the major tag that is very popular and common nowadays,’system’ is done right here .It does not spoon feed neither is it very vague,also people dont awaken skills out of thin air (at least it hasn’t happened yet).All I have are praises for the book and small things in some chapter that I feel can be improved or I don’t understand are mostly in the comments so I think this book is only going to get better..
The design and execution for this story to me is impeccable. I strongly recommend this novel. In my opinion the story is funny and is action packed. Please give this novel a try!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!