Honestly this is one of the few books I've read on here on WN that really has a good writing quality and enjoyable story plot. I just hope that the writer doesn't drop. This is a great book and even a blind bat can acknowledge that
This novel gave me a mix feeling. I want to continue at the same time I don’t. This is mainly dUe to the MC.
Spoiler:
Stole an Bird egg.
MC: Why is this bird targeting me?
Stole a phone.
MC: How did they find me?
Did a test evaluation on machine even tho he already have the system.
Also show off power at moment where it clearly will back fire later on.
(Chap 48)
Don’t know how it will continue later on.
hlo author
can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillers
and these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count
Meh juvenile comedy "oi yer a big bloke ain't ya" is not a comedy. Meh "magical realism", naming a system "goldfinger" and giving it a personality is meh, both it and MC are on the same level of stupidity just on different spectrums, one is naive retard, the other is a psycho retard.
MC not being completely hopeless and dead inside after 2 years inside a disgusting stomach of a sea serpent is weird, he did neither explore the memories of the original nor became hopeless and cynical, instead he became a naive and childish retard. The kinda of trauma he should've had considering how mentally weak he is - is not just not compatible with how he acts.
If you didn't read anything decent in a while you might as well read this average novel, if you read something good - just stay away.
I don't know what i expected considering the name of the novel, but high rating is just misleading.
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God Soldier Atlas
God Soldier Atlas
I hate this character limit man, cmon, I just don't want to write 150
This book is very good at starting, and here is what I mean. We first see that this guy is looking through something to find a cure for himself. Then, the book introduces who he is and how he got that point. It's a way to start the story without having to tell the background first.
This novel is amazing and deserves more recognition for how good it is so pls dont drop author................................................
Good.
Read it.
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so found this when it was first written and loved it, saw it got stripped down and started again. So I started it again then saw it got stopped for a second time, I've waited for a long while now for this to come back and continue as I'm really excited to see where this goes again. As someone with a love of systems and idles this was right up my ally and can't wait to see this kick off again.