Honestly, this story is good, but confusing. Confusing enough that I wonder if I can actually describe the story having just read the entirety of what is available.
The story revolves around a man that has reincarnated into a dead body that was recently tortured, alongside everyone on the spaceship he is on. While he’s getting his bearings, the ship’s AI has gained a sentience of some sort and has gained abilities that differ from normal AI. This story seems to revolve around them.
While the writing quality is good, I think that the story has too many questions left unanswered. The perspective will constantly shift to different people or events, leaving you lost. While these shifts happen, things will occur, yet will not be written about. You’re left wondering if you skipped a couple chapters. Things are discussed, but almost never explained. An example of this is the main character interacting with a new device he’s never seen before, yet as if he received an explanation, is manipulating the device. But we as readers are left in the dark as to what the device does and how the main character is interacting with it.
I like this story, but the storytelling itself needs a lot of work. Readers shouldn’t be left wondering where in the story they are, and what is going on.
