The characters are good and the story is nice.But the world is very badly created.The author hardly talks about the world, just follows the protagonist's life, doesn't care about anything about it.
I really liked this novel just after reading first five chapters as the world building and character focus are great.If you continue this it will be a big hit. I just hope you will not drop this.
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You have a great start and draft in your novel! I can see the potential it has. One thing though, you should probably re-read a few of your chapters as I am noticing a few grammatical errors. Hope to see you continuing to write in the future!
Very interesting story. I love how cynical the servant is??????reminds nje of The Prince. the story is very alluring and makes you wonder
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Great Book! Can’t wait for next chapter!
I agree with the part of humanity uniting but did the contries just disappeared like in one day is it really possible, thats the point kept me bugging through the story
I like it, even if it's only at the prologue. Although the world background needs more editing and the character design is lacking a little bit. Overall, everything's great!
so the book has a great premise and starts out slow but is good enough to read on. It truly is a bit complicated, but that doesn't interfere the plot. I applaud the authors' ability to maintain the plot lines.
I will 100% update this to a 5.0 rating once the author continues the story. I absolutely loved the previous book and was really excited about this one but it stopped. the characters and story previously were fantastic and this new book did not disappoint so far. please, author, I have been waiting for quite a while and very much anticipate your return!!!
Despite the seemingly inconspicious synopsis, the story is written quite well, with some hints of mystery mixed in and a natural development.