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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
I love the book and its just ok for me. Its absolutely great and I cant wait for the up coming chaps. Some spell checks should be done but overrall the book is ok and its intriguing.
The story is decent but I vote 1 star to cancel out the fake accounts made by the author
The story is decent but I vote 1 star to cancel out the fake accounts made by the author
The story is decent but I vote 1 star to cancel out the fake accounts made by the author
One of the greatest disappointments I've ever read. It's a full-on self insert power fantasy with no unique aspects. The MC is boring and all he does is drink. The author seems to have a rule where they can't have the MC interact with another human without them mentioning how handsome he is and how he has the air of an immortal. The story seemed to me like it was going to be a commentary on cultivation stories, but he ends up falling into generic cultivation cliches (arrogant young masters, face slapping, every woman falls for him, etc.) and even has a little "loli" spiritual herb (only a pedophile refers to ACTUAL CHILDREN as lolis, by the way. Even calling an old woman that looks young a loli is pushing it, but the spiritual herb is literally a child.) The story is non existent - the MC just sits there an drinks and only does anything (by anything, I mean waves his hand and kills everybody instantly) when somebody annoys him. The characters are annoying -. The sect master in particular is really annoying all the time and has to be constantly bailed out by the MC when he does something stupid. 2 stars for world building, since we at least get a general layout of the novel by about chapter 95. The only saving grace of the story is that the grammar is top quality, and the author is probably a native English speaker with how few grammatical mistakes I ever spotted. Past chapter 40, I was already kind of on the edge the whole time I was reading, but I had to stop reading the moment he gets a palm-sized child companion that he refers to as a loli. rant over.
great novel, only rated 4.8 for two reasons first didn't want to look like a bot secondly i cant get the idea that Nemu/ the Felian race look like there from 2019 "Cats". I mean just imagine waking up to two identical Felians in you bedroom! Horrifies me just to think about. But other than that its a great book, the writings impeccable, the world building and lore is great, there just the right amount. you don't feel bogged down when you first start reading and you aren't confused about whats going on due to lack of world building. also when new lore is revealed it makes sense, it isn't just added for plot convenience. And last but not least its got a responsive author, if you get confused by something you've read just post a comment asking about it and you will get a response clearing up any doubt you might have. i shouldn't have to say how great that is. Also relations in this make sense, if you risk life and limb together you probably have what it takes to be good friends if not basically family. where as certain other stories on here that wont be named basically go well we saw each other one in kinder garden so obviously we are soul mates. in conclusion its a really good story and at least give it a try, if you don't like it walk away but at least first give it a shot.
Concept is good but the story is so slow that it becomes very irritating. .
Writing is good! I wish it updates more often but, we should not pressure author-san!
This book is a total package for interesting plot and great concept. It hooks me up to read for more. Definitely worth the read. Job well done author!
I only read until chapter 20, boring that's all I can say, the plot follows the same plot as the comic. MC didn't do much change like when there was dialogue he didn't even take the initiative to speak just kept quiet and thought in his mind even when Tang San asked Yu Xiaogang to be his teacher MC just followed Tang san and I stopped reading there, I think the MC is really just a side character who followed Tang San like a chick. I'm just summarizing what I read, maybe some of you have read up to 20+ chapters, if so can you summarize the progress.
interesting.............................................................................................................................................
Okay, so my review is going to be spoiler heavy since there are few things I’d like clear up.
1. “I Can Pick Up Powers From The Novels I Plagiarized”
I have to honestly ask if we’re reading the same novel or not? All the stories he’s uploaded to the Evil God site are of his own creation. The first story about the golden finger was one he had written for an ero novel website, but because it was too graphic it was banned.
The second story he uploaded, was one he created based on previous trends and to further his understanding of the site and the benefits it provides to its authors at each level.
And the third story was once again a story he had written in the past during the time when the doctor sub-genre was trending.
2. This novel had devolved into standard wish fulfillment.
I can’t say that the person who made this comment is wrong, but if you were looking for anything more, then I have to say you’re in the wrong place — 99.9% of the novels on this website, be it the ones aimed at male or female readers, have some sort of wish fulfillment. They’re not the same kind of wish fulfillment, but they’re wish fulfillment nonetheless. And that’s okay. It’s why we read these novels in the first place; something to distract us from the slogs of our daily lives.
The only real criticism for this novel I can think of is that the author over describes things.
I have no idea how to close this review, but all I’ll say is that the concept is interesting, the writing is fairly decent, and the translation is surprisingly good — do give it a shot.
