what chapter does he find his wife? if anyone knows please tell me
This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels. This novel is very good, I hope there will be more sequels.
The start was great but he slowly loses his character and the story development becomes weird and un-understandable. Slowly I feel like his goal is not to be immortal it's weird he has a disciple or love interest I don't understand what's going on.
Whenever I see this translator, I know it's a great book fr.
Now again as fellow bros how can I not give my brother 5 stars but seriously.....you did a great job in this and also I can clearly see that you are improving your skills that's very nice....
I hope you get contracted soon
All around this story is average. It's a cultivation novel with typical cliches and a few typical features, but I haven't seen anything new yet. Sometimes that's good, because you just want to have an enjoyable read, and indeed some people love how "fast paced" the novel is, but not me.
The grammar is near flawless but the author's command of the English language is lacking. Moments seem to drag on forever and the writing seems to circle itself in a repetitive manner. These things happen mostly due to a bland, unvarried word choice. For readers like me, with higher expectations, I'm simply bored from reading it.
Plot-wise the story is average too. The world building doesnt seem very deep and there aren't very many characters, as if the author doesnt want to put the work in to making a large world. The time period and cultures aren't established (with either the use of objects, technology, or references). Nothing.
Furthermore the magic system is lacking. Even by chapter 30, when the MC has broken through two planes, I still dont know what the planes are, what the consequences of cultivating improperly are, what the elements are, or how the elements are used (in combat) ect. Even by chapter 30 there has been only one fight and it was totally lackluster. Missed opportunity for demonstrating the magic system in action.
Over all I would say average. I am still very impressed with the grammar, but there's unfortunately no character or charm to the writing. So even though it isn't distracting from the story, it is still detracting. Author should go back to rework scenes and actively use synonyms. Every adjective in a chapter should be unique. Every verb should be specifically chosen to best describe an action.
First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.
Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues.
The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet).
The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights.
The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.
The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.
But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!
Its awesome so far can’t wait for the author to post more of the story. i also did Realize how long they actually want you to write out a review almost there gotta hit the max words and done.
heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 27/01/2021 @chap170
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
Ratings
Conclusion
short review:
You want a villain mc? this is the novel you are searching for...
long review:
pros:
1) I just love action scenes. I am someone who skims thru action scenes in most of the novels... But here I read most of the action scenes. Author kept it short and easy to understand scenes.
2) In most of the novels by now people would be clear about the "world". But here author kept the mystery building but at the same time explains slowly about the world and just doesn't dump info. Everything here makes sense and nothing is "illogical" as of now...
3) author walks the talk!! The story is exactly what synopsis said unlike other novels where story changes after 100-200 chaps.
4) characters all feel real.. the side characters, the "villains", they all have their own personalities, own emotions, own goals. Even after brainwashing they retain their innate personalities, not just become what mc wants...
5) mc isn't perfect/genius. Even if he plans not everything goes how he wants.
6)
cons:
1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] for all those who came for R-18 scenes, just don't bother to read this novel... Infact R-18 scenes suck
2) [NOT REALLY A CONS] mc bears children which I really hate it... I personally don't like novels where mc has children...but this is just personal opinion so ignore it...
3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] the starting 10-15 chapters people might hate it since mc doesn't "act like his age", they might hate coz of his bad luck, but they forget he just arrived from modern world so it'll take time before he settles himself and author really did it well in later chapters
4) this really is not a "comedy" as the tags were mentioned... Rather "parody" tag might be better option
RATINGS:
writing: 9/10
update: 9/10
plot: 10/10
characters: 9/10
pacing: 9/10
dialogues: 9/10
entertainment: 10/10
OVERALL: 4.6/5
Conclusion:
Don't bother with the guys who reviewed after reading 25-30 chapters... Read 40 chapters and most of you might just get addicted....
This book is 5 stars. Although it is 'inspired' by some famous works, it still doesn't change that its a good one.
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I'll give it an opportunity because it's about my favorite genre, videogames. At least I expect every god to have a different goodhood or divinity.
It’s my first novel so I don’t know.But it’s a great novel.It also got me hooked.There sometimes some mistakes in spellings or grammar but I can understand what it actually meant so that’s not a big deal and I completely recommend to read It .