This is what I think I deserve after all of my soul I have poured in to this. I rewrote 80k words and what you see now is the rewritten version. I can't say for sure that now this book is the best you have ever read but its the best I have ever written among all of my other works :D
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At least until chapter 5, which are the chapters that are when I am publishing this, the novel is enchanting me.
Okay I gotta say since it feels like a manga and i kinda hate it, but honestly one thing i hate in manga isekais is not telling their parents about their powers they dont need to tell about reincarnated but powers would make it 50x better since the parents know and can support and help and its obv not good to hide secrets from your parents but what can i expect from a isekai type novel
The problem is that you have to wait for the chapters... like there's no new chapter in the last month so you have to wait quite a lot. But the story its good and the MC is not an idiot who dosnt know how to use his brain.
Every time the main character opens his mouth, I can't help but laugh.
This has very original plot, world and characters in my humble opinnion.
I especially like the main character and his inner struggels to try to move the plot in the direction he wants it to.
(would rate lower) These are always weird, they try to grapple too much. Like they have: a lot of interactions must be lude, all future events must be explained cuz you're a regressor, the field of your class must be explained because of how unique it is (economics), the family system must be constantly explained because of the mc background. The power system must be explained, school, etc. I am 4 and a half HOURS in and the mc has done almost NOTHING and we are only on the THIRD day.
Events: aptitude test and got a maid, won a house, a business and two maids because of the aptitude test, went to house and business
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The premise would have been interesting until I saw the harem tag. .
For a first try quite good. Normally I would give you 6/10 but I see that's get better with time soo 10/10. Keep it up [img=recommend]
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Good.